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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

person pink_lemonade
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow!!! great update ^^
james is pregggyyy!!!!! omg! i sooo wanna see how lucius is going to handle the mood swings considering James' already... um ya know, psychopathic... not to mention how draco and harry will take the news.
since lucius and james were never really the ideal paternal influence to both draco and harry i don't think the 2 kids'll mind. since the 2 young masters have problems of their own *snicker*
I sooo love how Umbitch (omg, still can't get over that one LOL) gets all crazy heheh serves her right!
and please be kind to severus... considering all of the things he had done shouldn't he get someone special to take care of him and love him like James has Lucius. I mean he's a great friend to Lucius and really cares for draco (even though in a misconcepted way) not to mention he did try to save harry even if he was mean. (considering he looks like the tormentor of his youth, i think i would've done the same without the saving part). and i'm sooooo waiting for severus to get pregnant!!!
speaking of pregnant i can just see james and severus sitting in a sofa with thier preggy bellies thinking of baby names soooooooooo cute ^_^
keep up the good work and take care ^_^
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Thank you for the cookies* loved this chapter it was so funny, honestly can Umbridge screetch any louder? James feeling nausea.....is it what I'm thinking it is *little patter of baby feet* or am I completely off my rocker, LOL, although I thought it was a little over kill with the taking of points from Slytherin, but hey I suppose James needed to make a point.
person MewMew2
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating, this chapter really put the story back on it's tracks so to speak.
person SilverLion
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what's next.
person k
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
perfect
person LS
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you really I do. Great chapter.
person SilverLion
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! That was PRICELESS! I love how you weasled James into place through Umbitch's Educational Decrees. Apparently the stupid broad forgot her own rules. Serves her right, the dozy cow.
person pink_lemonade
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i sooooo can understand what Minerva's feeling... with James running things hehehe this is gonna be fun ^_^
'Umbitch'... that was sooo good ! i i wonder what that cow's going to do but really. i think i got disgusted at the mention of her sex life *goosebumps*
yeyyyyy draco and harry !!! smut smut smut!!!! boooooooo CHO!
where's the siri and sevvy part?
Great update keep it up ^_^
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG James!!!! brilliant, no wonder he was having Lucius do *his thing*, the look on Umbridge's face, priceless, I never thought you would *out* James like that. As for Harry I totally agree with Hermione, he needs to talk to Draco, perhaps now that James is there it will be easier to do.
person MewMew2
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Thank you for updating so quickly! Please do so again when possible.