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for Five Ways to Forgiveness

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and well written
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I immensely liked this theme. Although I feel that 4 was unfinished a bit, since I would have like to have seen Harry forgive Draco. In any case, I enjoyed this.
person Jilliane
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM


The more of your stories I read, the more of a fan I become.

This was wonderfully written, as is everything of yours I've read so far, and quite thought provoking. A very original idea. Smut is fine, PWP, and romance, but once in a while it's nice to read a story that resonates and makes you think. Well done.
person KaiPhoenix
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this was one of the best oneshots I have read that takes place with any information from the 7th book. really, it's been fanfiction that's made the 7th book real for me (and likeable)
person KyuRyu
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but slightly confusing.....I'm going to give my brain a break and then come back and re-read it.....
person graballz
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and my ending is....HARRY AND DRACO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!! I totally agree with you on the entire basis for this story about one decision eliminates an entirely different set of choices. I enjoy movies like that too, with the alternate lives that people see they could have taken, and it makes me wonder what mine would be...

But anyway, this was really good! Cute, believable, and I have to confess that I DID make each ending end happily with Harry and Draco together (in my head) because I can't stand them not being together...

But this was really good! And I have to ask...do you work???? Do you have a job???? Because seriously, HOW do you have time to come up with SO many original plots, write them SO well, and post them ALL THE FREAKIN TIME???? Do you have a Time-Turner??? lol

I <3 you and your work!! All of it!
person NightLo
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually I am quite...confused, as some of the possibilities seem to link with another one...esp. 1 and 2 and 4 and 5...

However, no matter which one comes true, I would say that: they belong to each other, for Ginny esp. please stay away...
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what to think about that. I makes me think about something other then Harry and Draco having sex. I've sat and thought of the hundreds, thousands of possible turns my life could have taken if I'd done something differently. This story was just brilliant, even if it did make me sad at some points. I guess I can say that there was some parts of me that wished that Harry had woken up and realized it was nothing more then a dream of possiblities, next to Draco. Or even that he'd realized his mistake of marrying Ginny. I really liked this story, I'll probably end up reading it again to see if the answers to some of my unasked questions are imbedded in it. Thank you for writting this, again you have proved what an amazing author you are.

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
person beautifullove348
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice oneshot!

I absolutely loved the creativity and orginality of it. This story was very interesting to read. And the sexyness was a nice additional bonus :)

Your writing was perfect and all 5 scenarios were entertaining and brilliantly put together. I look foreward for more of your stories :)