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for This is the Way I Fall

by graballz

schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that arguing and throwing stuff. then harry holding him, wow. kind of romantic in a sick kind of way.
person DarQuing
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The first part of my review is for the first two fics in the series: Those were very good. There were some very hot scenes in all of them, especially the tango. Though, I can see why you might consider 'Patent Leather Miniskirt' to be a bit campy. :)

On to my review for this story: You are an evil, evil woman! :P Good story, but evil plot complication. :P
person Roozette
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol - Oh my that was fabulous. I really wish we Coven girls could have installed a camera in their apartment by now. Not that, you know, I endorse voyeuristic tendencies or anything...

hehehehe.... Ok, I'll trust you with our boys. I don't know why, but I had the oddest thought about this story. Well, two, actually. First, I was trying to determine the angst (I worry!) and thought, "Hmm... wouldn't it be funny if Draco was arrested for drug smuggling?" Then when I got to your 'Things Not Allowed At Hogwarts' I thought, "Hmm... wouldn't it be funny if Harry decided to go after world domination with a band of flying monkeys in an effort to free Draco?" Yeah, I have emotional issues.

LOVED this chap. Being the dirty fangirl I am, I read it twice. Can't wait for Brazil!!!

Kisses!
Roo
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me? Stop reading? Because of angst? Not likely. There's something about this series that has enthralled me. Wow, I never knew that sex in a closet could be so fucking hot without them being locked in. LMAO, I am not a fangirl. Okay, so maybe a little. I loved the way that Draco fucked himself on Harry's cock. Impatient much? That's alright I don't mind. That was absoultely the stuff wet dreams are made of. LMAO, it's true. I wake up soaking wet, needing bob or the nearest man. *giggles madly* I wonder what the delivery man would do if I answered the door ass naked with an invitation for him to join me. Man, I love fanfiction.

Nikki
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my god...WOW! Seriously? Im in shock....I need to know the story behind that. Good chapter dear.
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arthur raped Narcissa? Holy moly!!!!
person Roozette
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh.... *nods* It actually makes a lot of sense. I mean, there had to be something more between the Malfoy's and the Weasley's than sheer dislike. Lucius actively tried to kill Harry for goodness sakes, and he was STILL more civil to him than the Weasley's in public. But oh... learning this the night before vacation. Yeah... not so good for our boy's love life. *glares*

Although *looks shifty* Ron has NEVER been one of my fav characters. And Ginny... not a fan. Molly has too many issues as a mother - why else would all her children try to leave her so fast and so far away? Poor Narcissa. There is no shame whatsoever associated with the crime, and I am very proud of her for rebuilding herself and establishing her own family.

As for your note... when I first read I was right(ish) about the angst, I was like "What? Harry is going to take over the world with demon monkeys to free Draco?" LMAO!!! Oh my poor poor boys. *glares again*

*looks shifty*
*winks at your muse*

Come on, you know you wanna fix it...

Long live the Coven!
Roo

PS.
We're not voyeurs. We're....umm... simply making sure they don't hurt themselves. Right. *nods* Some of those positions can be awfully contorting... We, as loving fans, are duty bound to drool..err... assist. Yeah.
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find that hard to believe. The bomb that Draco dropped that is. I'm going to have to read the next chapter before I make a solid decision. I mean I just can't believe that the sweet man that I've come to know through the movies and fiction would commit such a crime. As for the Slytherin tacts implored by both Harry and Draco. I actually though Harry was going to fall for the psudeo tears and laughed out loud when he said: "Tell me anyway." And then I got to the cliffhanger and was like, Now why the hell did she leave it there?

A/N to Nikki: If the he's delivering Sunday shoes he's got the wrong house. Lol. But the porn mags? He's definately got the right house. I wonder if the mail man really thinks that. I mean, is he really waiting for me to invite him in for a hot and sweaty round of fucking? Lol, I guess I'll have to ask him next time I see him.

And as for our game of IM tag, you're it. I feel like you're avoiding me. You've posted on the forum, updated you story but haven't been on IM once. Was it something I did? *sniffles*

Nikki
person Roozette
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have to review one last time. So... because I love you tons and tons, I had to read your reviews. *shrug* I told you I have emotional issues.

I LOST it when I read thrnbrooks note. After that fabulous round of closet sex all she san say is "Now they have to do laundry!" Oh, I love her. Truly. I was so entertained by that.

Anyways, *cuddles Harry and Draco* best of luck with the next chapter!

~ Roo
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg poor narcissa. omg awesome fucking 2 chaps and yea im back!