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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, I can let you leave me speechless twice in a row! Ron, Molly, England...all on the tails of the fight they had about the Weasleys and the Malfoys. This just doesn't seem right. And then Harry, switching plans without discussing it with Draco! I don't see this as it getting better, you just worked another fight into the mix. Damn it!
To commense with the speechlessness:
... -Nikki
To commense with the speechlessness:
... -Nikki
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco is going to be sooo pissed! I've gotta have chapter 9!!!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freshman/Sophmore OMG ur american! How did I not guess, with the american frat houses etc!!! the horror the horror!!! Just kidding. I'm Australian, so I don't reli know how old freshman/sophmore makes u for that writing lol. But still I do know what you mean about the accident so bad but u can't look away, I must say i have my fair share of those. And I kinda take back what I said about having so much crap on the net now, coz without the crap the authors wouldn't develop into better writers, everyone has to go through a crap stage where they upload it coz they want to see what people think not necessarily because its good.
Awwwwwww poor Draco. Poor Harry! I would feel really bad if there was nothing I could do to help the one I love most when they are in need too, almost to the point of needing to help them to help yourself. And what you said about the joking about tentative issues is soo right. Which is why I try not to joke about anything controversial. One of my friends uses rape and abuse all the time as a joke, like I dunno, "she's raping my arm!!!" If I've grabbed onto her arm, or lots of stuff where she calls out "abuse" for no apparent reason other than a joke, and I don't say anything but it really gets on my nerves.
Well I'm off to read more since it's already uploaded!!! tehehe
Awwwwwww poor Draco. Poor Harry! I would feel really bad if there was nothing I could do to help the one I love most when they are in need too, almost to the point of needing to help them to help yourself. And what you said about the joking about tentative issues is soo right. Which is why I try not to joke about anything controversial. One of my friends uses rape and abuse all the time as a joke, like I dunno, "she's raping my arm!!!" If I've grabbed onto her arm, or lots of stuff where she calls out "abuse" for no apparent reason other than a joke, and I don't say anything but it really gets on my nerves.
Well I'm off to read more since it's already uploaded!!! tehehe
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think they're cry babies at all!!!!!!!!! Actually only just last night I was watching "So You Think You Can Dance" and there were men crying on it because they'd been kicked out which is a big thing for a dancer coz it's like being told you're no good when you've worked soo hard all your life to be good at dancing (I would know, coming from a dancing background myself) and I seriously said to the person I was watching it with something along the lines of "Only real men can Dance and cry, especially on TV" and then I was reading you're AN about them crying whether it makes them any less of a man, and I was like OMG they danced and they cried!!! lol, my quote from last night works for this story!!!!
I think it's good that Draco opened up to Harry again, I knew they couldn't stay mad at each other for long! I can't wait to see how Harry explains it to their friends eventually though. Cuddles on the couch are the best kinds.
Well, off to the next chapter!
I think it's good that Draco opened up to Harry again, I knew they couldn't stay mad at each other for long! I can't wait to see how Harry explains it to their friends eventually though. Cuddles on the couch are the best kinds.
Well, off to the next chapter!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD. I ABSOLUTELY NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've always wanted to see a confrontation between Harry and Ron and the old England clan. I've also wanted to see the wizarding friends meeting the muggle american friends, i thought that would be pretty interesting, but I don't think that this is heading anywhere in that direction.
Molly's sick! OH NO! I like Molly. Although I'm not too sure as to how you are going to portray her in this because of what Arthur has done. Was she in on it? Did she condone what he did? Or did she not know, found out later, and forgave him? I'm really not sure. Or does she not know at all maybe? What I kinda don't understand is how come Lucius didn't use all his money and connections to bring Arthur down, to put him in prison, to take all his money away (not that he has any to start with), seek a dementor's kiss or something. Coz knowing Lucius he'd be likely to want revenge for his wife when he found out the truth, not just have petty fights in book stores. But I wont say more coz that could stuff up your fandom. I'll pretend it doesn't exist if you want me to, alright?? lol.
Yeh, I didn't think they were going to Brazil. I was like OK, either this person knows about Brazil and has been there before, or they're not actually going lol. Besides, what story can you get out of two lovers going on a week holiday anyway? Shhhhhhh don't say smut that will ruin my logic!!! lol.
OK well, update as fast as humanly possible for my sanity and I will love you forever!
~gorgeousbowneyes
Molly's sick! OH NO! I like Molly. Although I'm not too sure as to how you are going to portray her in this because of what Arthur has done. Was she in on it? Did she condone what he did? Or did she not know, found out later, and forgave him? I'm really not sure. Or does she not know at all maybe? What I kinda don't understand is how come Lucius didn't use all his money and connections to bring Arthur down, to put him in prison, to take all his money away (not that he has any to start with), seek a dementor's kiss or something. Coz knowing Lucius he'd be likely to want revenge for his wife when he found out the truth, not just have petty fights in book stores. But I wont say more coz that could stuff up your fandom. I'll pretend it doesn't exist if you want me to, alright?? lol.
Yeh, I didn't think they were going to Brazil. I was like OK, either this person knows about Brazil and has been there before, or they're not actually going lol. Besides, what story can you get out of two lovers going on a week holiday anyway? Shhhhhhh don't say smut that will ruin my logic!!! lol.
OK well, update as fast as humanly possible for my sanity and I will love you forever!
~gorgeousbowneyes
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grabs laptop*
*ponders*
*puts laptop down*
*grabs book*
*throws it at Gabz*
WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO OUR BOYS!!!!!!!
*ponders*
*puts laptop down*
*grabs book*
*throws it at Gabz*
WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO OUR BOYS!!!!!!!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*deep cleansing breath*
Ok, I apologize for the book. Seriously, this chapter was VERY well written! I could SEE Draco flouncing off to the bathroom. I could SEE the LOOK on Harry's face as Draco rejected his presence. I could HEAR Draco crying into his pillow. I could SEE them cuddling on the couch. Itch-Bay!
But I get it. When distressed I like to throw things. Or break things. I throw a right temper tantrum before locking myself away and hiding from reality. So I feel for our boys. Scot used to bemoan the fact I have rather precise aim. *smirks* But I am SO GLAD Draco and Harry realize they are stronger together than apart. And Harry being able to sleep now that he had his Draco with him? Can you hear me saying "awwwww...."
And, silly girl, we Coven members don't give up on each other over one little disagreement. Of COURSE I still lvoe you! Now, go make our boys better and I'll call off the contrat on your head *evil smile*
Kisses!
Roo
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SOOOO glad your daddy is ok!
Ok, I apologize for the book. Seriously, this chapter was VERY well written! I could SEE Draco flouncing off to the bathroom. I could SEE the LOOK on Harry's face as Draco rejected his presence. I could HEAR Draco crying into his pillow. I could SEE them cuddling on the couch. Itch-Bay!
But I get it. When distressed I like to throw things. Or break things. I throw a right temper tantrum before locking myself away and hiding from reality. So I feel for our boys. Scot used to bemoan the fact I have rather precise aim. *smirks* But I am SO GLAD Draco and Harry realize they are stronger together than apart. And Harry being able to sleep now that he had his Draco with him? Can you hear me saying "awwwww...."
And, silly girl, we Coven members don't give up on each other over one little disagreement. Of COURSE I still lvoe you! Now, go make our boys better and I'll call off the contrat on your head *evil smile*
Kisses!
Roo
PS.
SOOOO glad your daddy is ok!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, because I am truly pathetic (no really, don't even think of arguing) I thought about this story at work all day today. And I have come to the conclusion that I am really mad at Harry.
I get the fact that Molly is ill, but Ron and them basically told H/D to fuck off and they haven't spoken in a year. Now Harry sees Ron and it's all happy go lucky? No!!! If I were Draco I would throw a right tantrum in the airport and either go home or catch the other flight to Brazil. How dare harry just accept Ron's apology like that and decide their vacation? Especially when Draco is exghausted and overwrought. *glares*
*cuddles Draco protectively while giving Ron evil rabid fangirl death glare* (patented)
At least let my Draco argue with Harry over this! Ron has to realize that simply showing up will not ensure his immediate forgiveness. *punches Harry* *glares at Gabz's muse*
But I still love you :)
Roo
I get the fact that Molly is ill, but Ron and them basically told H/D to fuck off and they haven't spoken in a year. Now Harry sees Ron and it's all happy go lucky? No!!! If I were Draco I would throw a right tantrum in the airport and either go home or catch the other flight to Brazil. How dare harry just accept Ron's apology like that and decide their vacation? Especially when Draco is exghausted and overwrought. *glares*
*cuddles Draco protectively while giving Ron evil rabid fangirl death glare* (patented)
At least let my Draco argue with Harry over this! Ron has to realize that simply showing up will not ensure his immediate forgiveness. *punches Harry* *glares at Gabz's muse*
But I still love you :)
Roo
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really angsty! Poor Harry. Let it out dear! Let it all out! Draco did really lay into Harry....albeit quietly but still! Thanks for updating! Oh and for the review! It made me smile! Im glad you enjoyed it! I was also hoping that people could empathise with the their situation! Enough about mine! Please update again soon!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn you!!!! i hate you ronn i wantedd brazil you bastard!