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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Draco's a psychological mess, and aware of the mess. Its unusual to see him so aware of himself (or lack of himself). Lucius and Narcissa are running for a while, taking Draco with them - and not telling him where they're going... that can't be positive for him - especially as he's come to the conclusion that he is who they molded him to be, and that they've effectively lied to him.
Hermione seems so lost - though I get the impression that once the Golden Trio vanquished Voldemort, that she doesn't have a role in society anymore; from the offset, Hermione has longed to belong (learning all she could so she fitted in; trying to be the best; crying because she had no friends) - and now she's just like everyone else.
So, the two became lovers and changed everything... I wonder how - but chapter 2 will probably tell me that!
Draco's a psychological mess, and aware of the mess. Its unusual to see him so aware of himself (or lack of himself). Lucius and Narcissa are running for a while, taking Draco with them - and not telling him where they're going... that can't be positive for him - especially as he's come to the conclusion that he is who they molded him to be, and that they've effectively lied to him.
Hermione seems so lost - though I get the impression that once the Golden Trio vanquished Voldemort, that she doesn't have a role in society anymore; from the offset, Hermione has longed to belong (learning all she could so she fitted in; trying to be the best; crying because she had no friends) - and now she's just like everyone else.
So, the two became lovers and changed everything... I wonder how - but chapter 2 will probably tell me that!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Well, those two forgot a contraceptive charm.
I can't believe Hermione's parents!! How could the first thing her Mother suggests is 'making an appointment'? How could they just lay into her and give her more reason to flee to Molly than stay with them! The Granger's couldn't have handled that worse if they'd tried! (smashing plot device!!!)
I love that Harry, Ron + the Weasleys have just taken her in, accepted her, and stopped asking questions when she wouldn't answer them.
So, Grace is a pretty combination of mum + dad, she's got gold hair and curls, with Draco's eyes (what's with eyes and wizards - Snape babies have black eyes, Malfoy babies are slate gray, Harry babies are emerald green... odd.) Harry's going to ruin that little girl, she'll be spoilt rotten with him wrapped firmly around her little finger!!
I love how Hermione has actually tried to tell Draco he's a father - she hasn't buried her head in the sand and hoped he'll never know. So sad she can't find him!
Well, those two forgot a contraceptive charm.
I can't believe Hermione's parents!! How could the first thing her Mother suggests is 'making an appointment'? How could they just lay into her and give her more reason to flee to Molly than stay with them! The Granger's couldn't have handled that worse if they'd tried! (smashing plot device!!!)
I love that Harry, Ron + the Weasleys have just taken her in, accepted her, and stopped asking questions when she wouldn't answer them.
So, Grace is a pretty combination of mum + dad, she's got gold hair and curls, with Draco's eyes (what's with eyes and wizards - Snape babies have black eyes, Malfoy babies are slate gray, Harry babies are emerald green... odd.) Harry's going to ruin that little girl, she'll be spoilt rotten with him wrapped firmly around her little finger!!
I love how Hermione has actually tried to tell Draco he's a father - she hasn't buried her head in the sand and hoped he'll never know. So sad she can't find him!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! poor harry first he had a moody and pregnant hermione now he has to deal with her and draco and their 'intimate' moments. glad things are going a little better for you! waiting patiently for more ;-p ...
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. There's a certain sweetness to it that one doesn't really tend to find in many of the DM/HG stories. But it's done in a way that isn't false or sickingly adorable. Nice job and keep up the good work.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is as usual a great fic. I am so sorry to hear about your dog that sort of thing always sucks out loud. I hope everything is looking up though, I am not a military wife and I have no idea how you do it all. Anyway I love yout vulnerable Draco.. Keep up the good work!!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aha, being caught red faced by the boy who lived :P the shame...
come on mione give in to draco, hes too hot not to lol
great chapters, loving this story cant wait for the rest!
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come on mione give in to draco, hes too hot not to lol
great chapters, loving this story cant wait for the rest!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say. I love ever bit of the story. I know you already know this. Sorry I lost net last night and when I passed out! LOL Have a great day today! You know where to find me! Hugs Syg
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy girl am I!! I absolutely love your stories. I was looking at your profile and saw that you uploaded the first 11 chapters of this new story and I am soooo happy. It seems like this story is writing itself, it flows so easily from chapter to chapter. I really like your Draco in this story, he feels like such a lost soul at the beginning but after seeing his little girl, I completely understand your story title, as she is truly his "saving grace" as is Hermione. I also like that Narcissa has a backbone in this story...go Grandma Cissy!! And our Lucius, he is going to have to change his tune, as hard as that may be! But I feel that between our strong headed girl, Hermione and her beautiful daughter, Grace, that the both of them may also be Lucius' saving grace for him to connect finally to his son. Thanks for updating so fast and as always looking forward to more chapters.
Hoping everything is well with you and family! thanks again for your wonderful creative stories.
Hoping everything is well with you and family! thanks again for your wonderful creative stories.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! it's actually a pretty cliched plot, but somehow it seems unique here. i love your style! please update!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet story. I absolutely am in love with it. The vulnerable Draco is very interesting. Terrific writing. I'm so looking forward to your updates!