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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Lucius is an arse, isn't he. He's taking the 'stiff upper lip' too far - he's disappointed that Draco's showing emotion, yet he has never noticed that Draco was in a severe depression.
I loved that Draco wasn't the Slytherin Sex God and didn't know how to play Hermione's body like a violin! He was unsure, it was quick, it wasn't perfect, it was a bit of a fumble... and it was perfect!
I think his reaction to Ginny holding the baby was a tad cruel - even though it was probably said in sarcasm. Though, Ginny told him all he needed to know with very little information. And a quick look at hair and eyes confirmed it. Ginny is no simpleton - she'll put 2 and 2 together and work it out!
Lucius is an arse, isn't he. He's taking the 'stiff upper lip' too far - he's disappointed that Draco's showing emotion, yet he has never noticed that Draco was in a severe depression.
I loved that Draco wasn't the Slytherin Sex God and didn't know how to play Hermione's body like a violin! He was unsure, it was quick, it wasn't perfect, it was a bit of a fumble... and it was perfect!
I think his reaction to Ginny holding the baby was a tad cruel - even though it was probably said in sarcasm. Though, Ginny told him all he needed to know with very little information. And a quick look at hair and eyes confirmed it. Ginny is no simpleton - she'll put 2 and 2 together and work it out!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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So, Harry's the one with the brain! But his possessive nature is rather frightening! Is he so desperate to have a real family and to belong? I hope he doesn't meddle in things to come - I thought he was better than that.
So, Harry's the one with the brain! But his possessive nature is rather frightening! Is he so desperate to have a real family and to belong? I hope he doesn't meddle in things to come - I thought he was better than that.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Lucius needs a reality check - and quickly, before he shoves Draco back into a depression! He's more worried that he's upset his Mother than the fact there is something wrong in the first place!
I loved how they were so calm, the time away has done well for Draco, he's so mature and thoughtful now - a credit to himself. Parenthood has done her some good too - even if it has turned her world upside down. If they can make a go of it, they'd make a wonderful little family... providing the various opponents don't stand in their way.
Harry is angry, but resigned that he's going to be uncle Harry, rather than Daddy.
Pink with sheep - reminds me of my dressing gown NOW - but its blue with sheep! See - great minds think alike, when it comes to Ovine clothing!
Lucius needs a reality check - and quickly, before he shoves Draco back into a depression! He's more worried that he's upset his Mother than the fact there is something wrong in the first place!
I loved how they were so calm, the time away has done well for Draco, he's so mature and thoughtful now - a credit to himself. Parenthood has done her some good too - even if it has turned her world upside down. If they can make a go of it, they'd make a wonderful little family... providing the various opponents don't stand in their way.
Harry is angry, but resigned that he's going to be uncle Harry, rather than Daddy.
Pink with sheep - reminds me of my dressing gown NOW - but its blue with sheep! See - great minds think alike, when it comes to Ovine clothing!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm rereading the chapters today. I stayed up late to finish the first 11 that were posted. I like this story a lot, it's so sweet! Any way, I wanted to give you some specific feedback. I love the fact that Draco is suffering from depression. What a great idea. I don't think I've seen it in any other fanfics. Also, I thought it was such a sweet detail that both Hermione and Draco have keepsakes from their night together. Finally, I love how Draco learns about his daughter.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely work. Please update ASAP!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tut, bad lucius....she is your grand daughter fool.
i dont know how hermione cant give in to draco i know i would :P
great chapter as always x
i dont know how hermione cant give in to draco i know i would :P
great chapter as always x
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I get on every night to see who updated and when I see this story I have to stop and read the updates. Great Job!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story sooooooo much, the minute that I walk through the door I run to my computer and search out the new updates. I can't wait to see how it ends.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story...
Yeah, so what if Draco is a bit OOC - but that's what I love about it. And he's finally standing up to Lucius. I'm not usually a big Dramione shipper (still waiting on your story of my favorite werewolf *hint hint wink wink*)...but some stories with Draco and Hermione are just worth reading and this is just one of them. I also loved your other Dramione story - it was very cute.
Hope you can update soon...
Yeah, so what if Draco is a bit OOC - but that's what I love about it. And he's finally standing up to Lucius. I'm not usually a big Dramione shipper (still waiting on your story of my favorite werewolf *hint hint wink wink*)...but some stories with Draco and Hermione are just worth reading and this is just one of them. I also loved your other Dramione story - it was very cute.
Hope you can update soon...
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's very sweet and it's not rushed. I also noticed that you just put it up yesterday and are up to 11 chapters. Great job! I have read a few of your stories before, and I have to say that this one and "Love Thy Enemy" have to be two of my favorites. I keep the latter bookmarked along with "Heat" to read whenever I want to over again. I can't wait to read the next update on this story though.