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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was okay I like the way you did her and the babe, yeah the sev and all their reactions are off like you said... and siri is kinda' funky too O.o but your main point with cece and herm is good.
~eros
~eros
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no it was good. i liked bills reaction to sev smiling. that was funny
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and hope more goes up soon.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story..
pleaz, pleaz, pleaz update soon
pleaz, pleaz, pleaz update soon
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can u please add more.i like his story a lot and i was wandering if you can continue
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far would you mind emailing me when the next chapter is ready?
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sev... washed hair.... hugging............ NO way lol
its great ummm yeah change the name of the DA .... maybe (MPA) Magical Protection Alliance ???idk i figure if it still has DA (variations) bumble butt can mess it over
~Eros
its great ummm yeah change the name of the DA .... maybe (MPA) Magical Protection Alliance ???idk i figure if it still has DA (variations) bumble butt can mess it over
~Eros
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well you could have it change back to the defence association until they come up with something better. Good chapter n dont worry about not updating in a while, it happens.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see what happens next
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWe i can't believe you left it there lol