rate_review Reviews

The extremely quick pace of this fic makes it difficult to believe. Also, I dislike it when people think that not being the perfect Gryffindor automatically translates to tons of piercings and tattoos. Let's face it, Harry Potter and Hermione Granger just aren't the type. You've taken them so entirely out of character that the story is just extremely unreadable to me. You really should put an OOC warning on this, because it's out of control.

I mean, I've read stories where they take Harry from the character he is, to an entirely new person. But those authors took the time to sit there and develop his character properly so that it was a believable change. This story goes from one wildly out of character moment to the next. What, after six years of hating one another and treating each other like shit, The Silver Trio and Harry/Hermione suddenly are friends?

Also, why do Harry/Hermione just take their word for it and trust them right off the bat? It's not in their nature as characters to do so, and it would be inherently stupid of both of them considering the war that's going on around them.

I like Weasley bashing, and Dumbledore bashing, so that wasn't the problem. Even though I love Dumbledore in the real books. The story just makes no sense, because you haven't taken the time to do any proper character development.

I'm sorry if this came off mean, because I didn't mean it to. I just really needed to voice the way I feel about this story, and this is what came out. I guess I was expecting a lot more, and I was disappointed. Because the idea behind this is a good one. The execution just left a lot to be desired. It isn't labeled as a crack fic so, I can only assume you were entirely serious when you wrote it.

I only have one problem with this.. otherwise it's a lovely story.. it's seriously anti-climatic.

Ok for some reason I'm sure I've missed a few chapters, cos I cant believe its the end already. Pouts. Really enjoyed the story. ^_^

I am sooo going to miss this story!!!

Your story is great I would love to know when you update. Could you please send me an email

L

very nice and lots of fun. if you are not opposed to it i would like a more detailed sex scene next. Lily, James, and Sev threesome; never saw that coming but it is believible. bugger about the beinging Voldemort's gradson though. hope your arm heals up. i had the same problem awhile back. i'm a novelist and i was denied the one thing that brought me pleasure, writing! *weep* take it easy and be careful! if you care for a chat email me wingshinigami@gmail.com or find me on facebook! ^_^

keep goin! i'm likin it!

Get better soon!! Take care of the arm and wrist ok? Love the chapter

wonderful as always! oh and by the way i like the way the characters change so often it gives them more an element of real life if you think about it because no one has the same personality their entire life because they grow and expernse deffernt things just like this characters!

Sooo need chapter 16!!