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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! that was a sweet ending.
and your author's notes had me tearing up
and laughing in equal turns.
you're about the only author i'm still actively
reading here anymore. too much time spent with
my own writing. i don't have much time to read...
i thoroughly enjoyed it and i hope it wasn't all
that painful to write.
~brightest blessings~
ldf
and your author's notes had me tearing up
and laughing in equal turns.
you're about the only author i'm still actively
reading here anymore. too much time spent with
my own writing. i don't have much time to read...
i thoroughly enjoyed it and i hope it wasn't all
that painful to write.
~brightest blessings~
ldf
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good. The interaction between the twins is an interesting twist that I think you should exploit more. "Sharing" was a great read.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the Three Stooges. that was a nice touch.
please tell me you aren't ending this early because
i seem to be the only one reading. please tell me that
there is only one chapter because you only intended to
write twelve.
i've had fun reading this.
~blessings~
ldf
please tell me you aren't ending this early because
i seem to be the only one reading. please tell me that
there is only one chapter because you only intended to
write twelve.
i've had fun reading this.
~blessings~
ldf
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i read the last chapter the other day and meant to
sign in and review. silly me.... so here i am now!
another wonderful chapter. i particularly loved the
closing line. can't wait to read more.
~blessings~
ldf
sign in and review. silly me.... so here i am now!
another wonderful chapter. i particularly loved the
closing line. can't wait to read more.
~blessings~
ldf
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another fine chapter, sir.
part of it was nail biting, part of it
reminded me of CSI to the point where i
was laughing and then the last part was
enough to draw a few tears.
i enjoyed it very much. thank you!
~blessings~
ldf
part of it was nail biting, part of it
reminded me of CSI to the point where i
was laughing and then the last part was
enough to draw a few tears.
i enjoyed it very much. thank you!
~blessings~
ldf
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another fine chapter, my good sir.
keep them coming. even if no one else
reviews. never fear, i'll be here to do so.
~blessings~
ldf
keep them coming. even if no one else
reviews. never fear, i'll be here to do so.
~blessings~
ldf
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles*
i loved the ending. perfect way to spoil the
really sweaty, mind blowing, lovely sex.
can't wait to see what you have in store for
poor Charles next chapter.
toodles!
~blessings~
ldf
i loved the ending. perfect way to spoil the
really sweaty, mind blowing, lovely sex.
can't wait to see what you have in store for
poor Charles next chapter.
toodles!
~blessings~
ldf
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another excellent chapter, sir. got a little
misty eyed with Amber, but i suppose that's to
be expected.
can't wait for me.
~blessings~
ldf
misty eyed with Amber, but i suppose that's to
be expected.
can't wait for me.
~blessings~
ldf
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a very lovely chapter, even if it was
a bit short.
*looks around in frustration*
i don't understand why no one else is reviewing
this. its a good story. so maybe it isn't one of
the prime pairings. big deal. the pairing shouldn't
make the story. the author's ability to tell the
story is what makes the story.
and you, my dear sir, have an excellent ability to
tell the story!
~blessings~
ldf
a bit short.
*looks around in frustration*
i don't understand why no one else is reviewing
this. its a good story. so maybe it isn't one of
the prime pairings. big deal. the pairing shouldn't
make the story. the author's ability to tell the
story is what makes the story.
and you, my dear sir, have an excellent ability to
tell the story!
~blessings~
ldf