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DUnno if i reviewed this chapter yet but if I have nevermind I'll review again! I'm so nervous everytime you post a new chapter because I can sense the end may be nigh, and I so hope both Snape and Harry get a happy ending. This story has progressed so well and so have Harry's feelings, the way you have changed him was so natural and flawless that I almost missed it!
As always, astonishing! Cannot wait for the next one!
Shigure-san
x chuu x

ok so i've spent the past 4 days reading this story, i have to agree with the earlier readers: when harry and snape were training it got kinda old fast! i was actually happy when harry was tortured, by the way........the BDSM scene, even though Harry was terrified....was hot! but now moldy-voldy is in love with harry?! is it a ruse? my head hurts from thinking about it! when i first saw this story up on the site i thought :Ugg another "lets torture harry" story so i stayed away from it but after reading all 56 chapters in 4 days, i like it! update soon *kisses*

Excellent chapter! Keep up the good work!

Yay, specially loved the flirting :D

I absolutely love these two chapters just as much as I love everything else that came before. Thank you for staying the course with this.

That said, I'm slightly confused about Harry's "(not)Dream" and his lack of response to it. While I'm pleased that he doesn't jump the gun and immediately suspect Snape and throw away all the trust that's been built between them... I just wonder why there seems to be no reference to the dream in the chapter that follows. I felt like I'd missed a chapter or something. But of course I still thought these were excellent.

Flirting and a great insight of what's about to come...

Brilliant update! Harry's fear was very palpable during the training sessions.

But I loved them dancing around one another in the kitchen.

Hmm... the last bit is interesting. I had to take Ethics recently, and of course we covered the "would you kill her to save all of us?" using one of the other students in the classroom. My response would be that I would allow her to die if someone else pulled the trigger. I was too squeamish to do it myself. But then, I can't kill spiders or snails without feeling guilty. I wonder what the scans would be like with different people who have different.. I dunno. Things that they would do. My husband and my paramour would not hestitate to harm or kill if needed. I think I could for the sake of my children, and I watched the slaughter of two cattle that would be our beef for the next few years, but that was about as far as I could go.

Very interesting chapter. I was wondering if you were going to stick with Harry as the horcrux, and if so, how they would find out. Strangely, I gave it a lot of thought and even went through a few scenarios in my head. Including Snape calling him an idiot for getting himself recklessly killed. I do like the way you did it, not that my opinion matters much, and it was nice to see what was going on with that shadow.

I will say... Harry's getting ballsy. And Snape... well, he's becoming rather entertaining, isn't he? And I love it being pointed out to Harry that they love each other.

Slightly entertaining, my captcha for this is "the thickest." How appropriate.

So, the Horcrux in Harry is in love with him, while the outside one has no clue about it? Or is he still connected to his Horcrux?
Loved!

You have a colleague who studies the neuroscience of morality? This explains so goddamn much about the sophistication of this story. Begs to ask the questions what is your area of specialty?

Anyway, great chapter. Snape's masturbation cream was a hilarious delight. "I made that when I was still in Hogwarts," indeed. LOL. If Snape just patented and sold jars of that stuff alone he could have lived on easy street for the rest of his life. Ha!

Also, with this dream at the end you've sort of thrown in a game changer. The dream conversation brings up a lot of questions and issues for Harry to consider. He realizes he is a Horcrux. Also, this means Voldemort realizes everything too. Its a weird scenario. Voldemort claims he loves Harry -- which is bizarre, unless you consider the only person Riddle really cares for is himself and now Harry is a part of that. Also the similar backgrounds might help him relate. But then again, if everything he says is true, then he also knows Snape is a spy and has been training Harry to defeat him. And if he could feel all the torture Harry's been going through, why let the tortures continue? There is both truth and deception going on here. The fact that Riddle could remove Harry from Snape at the drop of a hat throws into question why he would say Harry was captive of Snape. Manipulated truths make the best lies because you see the facts are real.

I'm truly looking forward to your next update. Things are going to get extremely interesting. Keep up the fantastic work!

He had wards... for the ring at the shack and for the pendant at the cavern, he didn't need any for the diary or the cup as they were in Gringotts (goblin warded) and the diadem was at Hogwarts, also warded. Nagini had himself as protection and there was nothing he could do about Harry...