rate_review Reviews

I have to say I really enjoy this story. It is by far my favorite story in the Harry Potter-universe.
It is very creative and the plot is exciting and interesting, not to mention that you are a very talented writer who makes the text seem fluid and alive in a poetic sort of way.
The latest episode really made me begin to wonder whether Tom is completely honest with what he claims Snape to be doing and feeling. I don't know who to believe, although what Tom has stated does make sense. However, a part of me still believes Snape's the good guy so I don't want to judge him too soon. I guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens.
Hope you update soon!

Loved the chap, but I'm also a bit confused right now, probably like Harry... I believe in Snape though.

please update soon! thanks

Wow this has been an awesome weekend (though I've neglected a ton of work I must do), but I must say this story has me heart wrenched. I could feel from early on around chapter 25 that this was probably not going to be the type of story where at the end Harry and Snape end up perfectly together and live happily forever. And now I've thought of every possible way that they could end up together and to no success do I see it working (hope you prove me wrong!)..

And at first I was terrible confused, I still am a bit (and if I'm wrong, then I'm major befuddled). But my speculations: The dreams (well current non sex involved dreams) are dreams from the Horcrux right? The horcrux inside Harry is what has fallen in love with him and the Horcrux is saying that Snape is actually the one that is keeping Harry there all along. I kind of don't understand that because I do believe Voldemort wants him.

But that's where I think the Horcrux inside Harry currently is being blocked off from revealing anything to Voldemort, hence Snape hasn't been killed yet. I think Snape's magic along with what was placed in Harry's cell by Voldemort is preventing this from happening along with Harry's Occlumency.

I also think Snape is trying to possible detain Harry because he knows Harry is a Horcrux (I'm saying that because you seem to be following closely to the book, but at the same time drifting and in the book Snape knew from early on Harry must eventually die).

I think Snape is trying to thwart this because at first his love for Lily that was too strong to let her child die, but now because he has genuinely fallen in love with Harry. And he's protecting him by controlling him (which Harry seems to hate a lot).

So, while I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, I am terrified to have Snape and Harry leave each other (which seems like the inevitable -__-, ). I also since book 5, have hated the Ginny/Harry ship, it's possibly the most horrible pairings I have ever seen.

Oh and that's another reason why I don't necessarily think the Snape relationship won't work. He "thinks" he loves Ginny a lot. While, going from the book, they haven't really spent a lot of time together. Especially not as much as he spent with Snape.

Anyways, this was kind of me rambling about my confusion and theories. But I love your story. I normally don't read torture fics in general, but I always saw this one, and was just in a reading mood and had to read this story. I also liked the references to the books, it helps that I read a lot of them because now I think I understand Snape's character a lot. And I hope you still plan on writing this story from Snape's POV. At first I thought, it would just turn out like a summary of this story, but because of the past few chapters I'm dieing to know what Snape has been thinking the whole time. Ahh!! You've completely captured me.

BRILLIANT! But why must Snape lie to Harry?! Or, why should Harry trust Tom? Hm...

Wow. I like this story. Great sex scene! Keep up the good work.

I am running out of worthy enough praise for you! You are just such a stunning author, one that got me into Snarry in the first place and every single syllable of your work grips me. I cannot wait to see where this story ends up and as ever, an amazing chapter, I shall struggle to wait patiently for the next!
Best wishes!
Shigure-san
x chuu x

I really like how you've maintained a sense of purpose in this story - I still feel like it's going somewhere, even after so many chapters. And I love their teasing, playful relationship here, although I'm afraid Tom is going to spoil it. Great job, this story keeps on at the same level of perfection and that's really hard to do!

This was probably the best sex scene you've written between the two of them. Too bad it had to end with a bit of distrust. Now I'm not sure just what will happen.


Keep up the great work!

holy fuuuck that was guh sop hot... god seriously... and u end it there? ur really mean u know? so please update soon!