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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Boo I had 2 more chapters to read. Then the site said it was hidden. So not fair. I enjoyed reading this story. Very well written. Love the interaction between Snape and Harry.
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sitting on absolute tenterhooks*
*chews nails*
*wails*
Beautiful action scenes there, and I love the way you've twisted the canon. This story is as brilliant as it always has been, but...
If he's dead, my heart is already going crunch. [/end drama]
*chews nails*
*wails*
Beautiful action scenes there, and I love the way you've twisted the canon. This story is as brilliant as it always has been, but...
If he's dead, my heart is already going crunch. [/end drama]
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
why is the story hidden?
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started and half way through the site told me the story was hidden. What I have read so far is really good and I hope to be able to finish the story soon. Thank you!
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have come across this story today and in one sitting, have read the entire 62 chapters. This is quite a brilliant story. I like how the relationship between Harry and Severus is actually how they should act if they were ever to be in this situation. I hate when authors demand that Harry should find Severus attractive, or that Severus is actually an attractive person (it takes away from his persona). I knew for a while that Snape was lieing to Harry. I thought it was stockholm syndrome but there is a small part of me that still believes in Severus. He is a very enigmatic person and I really do not know how this is going to turn out. For now, Severus plays the role as the villian but I think it was just too easy for Harry to find out Snape has been lieing to him, and he is actually the good guy. I highly doubt it but I cannot wait for the next chapter to come it. Amazing story.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And I also enjoyed all the novels you used, because those are really great stories and you seem quite educated in literature and classics.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a cliffhanger!!! AAARGH - I thought it was complete - nooooooo, please say you will update soon...it's sooooo close. Very interesting - good point finally bringing up Stockholm Syndrome, curious to see how you explain the time differences....
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think if your story doesn't have a happy ending for both Snape and Harry I might wet myself 0_0
Amazing as always though! Cant wait to see what you come up with next ^_^ looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.
I felt a bit sorry for Enitan(sp) - poor guy lol
Shigure-san
x chuu x
Amazing as always though! Cant wait to see what you come up with next ^_^ looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.
I felt a bit sorry for Enitan(sp) - poor guy lol
Shigure-san
x chuu x
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Great chap :D
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hiii! I just wanted to pop in, tell you you're doing a wonderful job!!!! This story is so real and amazing!!! I don't normally review, I suppose because I found this story a bzillion years ago, and then realized that there was more on your livejournal, so I've been keeping up to date with that. However, I realized that doesn't mean I can't review on here, so, Hi! Lol.
Seriously, though, this story is amazing. The fact that you can mold this entire relationship between these two in 50-plus chapters is amazing, especially when you see how rarely other characters barge in on our two lovely protagonists. It's the ultimate captor-captive relationship fic... they both have to rely on each other for social stimuli. I feel like your Snape is so very canon, too, I can't even praise you highly enough for how unbelievable he is. My absolute favorite stories are the ones that keep characters as close as possible to canon, while occassionally even adding a level of emotional depth, which you really have accomplished. Bravo!
And the smex.... Oh, how well you write it! You get Snape and Harry so embroiled in so many dirty deeds, without making us feel like it's really anything but completely amazing. Great use of magical tools, like potions, etc., as sex implements. That one should go without saying, but in your fic, the magical element in sex seems very real, and fits in with the world wonderfully. (I particularly liked your recent "Harry-as-potion-ingredient" scene you had going on in the Bunny Harry story, as well)!
Also, your grasp of the canon universe is so good, I honestly feel that it rivals Rowling's. If the point of her stories would have been Harry and Snape getting together, I feel like the plot would have unfolded exactly the same. Yes, you are that good! ;P
Anyways, this review has become too long, but I think your stories are amazing, you are a great writer, and I can't wait for the end of the fic, although I'm really, reallly nervous about how everything will shake down. I don't see how there can possibly be a happy ending, but... oh well. I'll leave that in your capable hands!
P.S. Can't, can't, can't wait for the Snape-centric version!!!!!!!!
Seriously, though, this story is amazing. The fact that you can mold this entire relationship between these two in 50-plus chapters is amazing, especially when you see how rarely other characters barge in on our two lovely protagonists. It's the ultimate captor-captive relationship fic... they both have to rely on each other for social stimuli. I feel like your Snape is so very canon, too, I can't even praise you highly enough for how unbelievable he is. My absolute favorite stories are the ones that keep characters as close as possible to canon, while occassionally even adding a level of emotional depth, which you really have accomplished. Bravo!
And the smex.... Oh, how well you write it! You get Snape and Harry so embroiled in so many dirty deeds, without making us feel like it's really anything but completely amazing. Great use of magical tools, like potions, etc., as sex implements. That one should go without saying, but in your fic, the magical element in sex seems very real, and fits in with the world wonderfully. (I particularly liked your recent "Harry-as-potion-ingredient" scene you had going on in the Bunny Harry story, as well)!
Also, your grasp of the canon universe is so good, I honestly feel that it rivals Rowling's. If the point of her stories would have been Harry and Snape getting together, I feel like the plot would have unfolded exactly the same. Yes, you are that good! ;P
Anyways, this review has become too long, but I think your stories are amazing, you are a great writer, and I can't wait for the end of the fic, although I'm really, reallly nervous about how everything will shake down. I don't see how there can possibly be a happy ending, but... oh well. I'll leave that in your capable hands!
P.S. Can't, can't, can't wait for the Snape-centric version!!!!!!!!