rate_review Reviews

As I've said, I went ahead to your live journal and read everything there as well, up to chapter 36, but I'll write my reviews here (without spoiling the story for everyone reading it here!) The story just gets better and better. Absolutely breathtaking. I honestly can't rave enough, it's just so impressive and the quality of your writing is superb. The plot is deep, involved, and totally intriguing; you've obviously put a lot of time and thought and effort into this story, and it's highly appreciated. Just....BRAVO!

I like it better when you respond on here! ^.^ Good chapter...I was scared for Harry. And its good to know that Snape really is good. And Im glad we are going o find out about the other soon! Update soon!

Arrrghh! Cliffhanger!

What a great story. The word that comes to mind over all is 'strong' - it has a very strong plot, the characters well defined, developed and interacted. I've been enjoying this very much and I sure hope I don't have to wait a super long time for the next installment. Poor Harry's torture can't go on indefinitely.

awwwww! more!! please!!! i love this!!!! PLEASE!!!!!

Chapter 18

Oh yah!!! Crucio at will!!!
Very exciting writing!!
The constant threat of Voldemort and Death Eaters makes
for a lot of tension and hot sex!!!

Your Snape is so very sexy even young HP can't believe
his own attraction. Nice touches of Harry's abusive past.
Provides lots for Snape to work with.

Harry with less and less drug in his system can gradually get used
to few "hard" realities!! Love the book themes and the cooking!!!

Love Harry being confronted with his own outrageous pre-orgasmic
screaming/mumblings!! Was that, "Ginny FUCK ME!!!!?" HA!!

Thanks,
R

For some reason I love to see Harry being tortured...I guess I just thought Voldemort would torture him alot so it fills me with wicked glee to see it. I also like to see Harry and Snape together...but you knew that huh? Great job!

Oh!...I just have to tell you this.....after reading all 18 chapters posted here so far, I was curious, went ahead and clicked on your live journal link and hit the mother lode. I'm absolutely enamoured with this story now. I never want it to end! Just...wow!

God...where to begin?! I've seen your story sitting there in the list and decided to have a quick look. I then proceeded to devour the next 17 chapters one after the other! My dear, you are most definitely a writer, do not think any less for even a minute! This story is awesome and I cannot get enough of it! Extremely well written and thought out, especially the literary references, and you've kept both characters to canon, particularly Harry. The story is original and intriguing, and the way you described what Lucius did to Harry with the needles gave me shivers.

This is definitely one of the better stories on this site, both in terms of writing and storyline. My appetite for more of this story is voracious! Please update again soon!

awesome update! total cliff hanger-but-not-really, though, lol. I was wondering when Harry would find a way to retreat into himself. How long will he be like that, though? was it only for the torture or will it continue through his recovery? it would definitely complicate things if he started doing this at the first sign of danger or something; the mind can only take so much after all. Anyway, update soon! ^^

Chapter 17

Love that Harry is such a teenager!!
Love that he loves Sex Snape!!
Love that Snape seems astounded by Harry's interest!!
Love that Snape is a mystery yet so protective and patient with Harry!!
Love that they will be "doing it" soon without benefit of potions!!!

Thanks,
R