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Chapter 25

I'd never be able to place a "T" into every sentence!!!
(Unless I was writing!!) Maybe I'll try that out tomorrow!!! Sounds fun!

HA!! Snape can't stand HP making all those licking, slurping and
sucking noises and HP can't stand seeing Severus touch his lips!!!
LOVE IT!! Driving each other to distraction!!!! BJ's are going to be
on both their minds!!!!! HA!

Yikes!! More torture!!! Bella gets right to it!! (She is soooo type cast!)
Still love their relationship!! Do you think they like teasing one another
or is it all still "subconcious"?!

Thanks,
R

Hahaha...they are sooooo into each other its not even funny! good chapter hun! Keep em coming!

Just finished chapter 25. Please tell me there will be more?
So far I am fascinated by the interaction between Snape and Potter.
will harry soon face off the Dark Lord? Can't wait to see more.

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Chapter 23

Oh!!! Harry's first exquisite blow job is administered by his Professor!!! YES!!! HA!!
Now there is no going back!!! It's great how you've got Harry's plotting out his next
sex sessions to include head!!! From gay Severus!!! LOL!!! Harry's so naive it's delicious!!!

Just wait 'till it's Harry turn to suck ole Severus off!!! He may become addicted to it!!!!
Love being locked in his head!!!

Thanks,
R

Arrrg. I can't believe he did not grab the book! Our hero has ADD! That was such a normal reaction, I like the way he still behaves like a young man, you have done a great job keeping him in character.

nice chapter. Who was the mysterious person Snape was with...and why does Harry care? O.o thanks for updating!

Awesome story. I just read it all now. I love how you kept Harry and Snape in character. Can't wait to read more.
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This is a wonderful story from the title onward. I thoroughly expect it to be a fandom favorite someday soon, despite the fact that it is rather mysteriously under-reviewed at present. You are a very fine writer. I adore your Harry, his confusion, his suffering, and his bravery. Love how you are employing Severus' literary choices to mirror their situation and possible outcomes. Snape too is exactly as scarily practical, convoluted, and enigmatic as he needs to be both to remain close enough to canon and to do his part in the context of your story. I look forward to seeing whether there are more twists to come or if Snape can advance his current plan (or at least his current stated plan!) On the one hand, I can't wait to see how this all turns out. On the other, I look forward to a long and wild ride. Please do continue writing many more stories in this pairing too, which happens to be one of my favourites. May the muse smile upon your endeavors here. May real life treat you kindly also.

Chapter 22

MacNair is a nasty piece of work!! (Hope Severus kills him in the end!!)
And that torture scene was particularly gruesome!! Glad Harry passed out!!

Enjoyed the conversations between the two of them. The spoon feeding and
creating a soft nest for HP in the cupboard, speaks volumes to the care with
which Severus treats Harry. I love it!!!

Thanks,
R