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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats an evil cliffhanger! great chap! can't wait for the next one!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really enjoyed the flirting between Harry and Snape while training, of course they would not call it that but to me it was.
The end of the chapter when Harry was thinking that he really should have made sure Snape enjoyed sex so he would not leave him behind so easily brought back to my mind that he is so young and inocent in so many ways. I have gotten so busy looking for romance in this story that totally forgot the situation Harry is in and how strong he is for not craking under it.
Now of course I am eager for another chapter but afraid to know what Avery is going to do.
The end of the chapter when Harry was thinking that he really should have made sure Snape enjoyed sex so he would not leave him behind so easily brought back to my mind that he is so young and inocent in so many ways. I have gotten so busy looking for romance in this story that totally forgot the situation Harry is in and how strong he is for not craking under it.
Now of course I am eager for another chapter but afraid to know what Avery is going to do.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I actually feel sick. I just feel so bad for Harry now! Oh my god I don't think I can take what Avery will do to him. Of course I will be reading it,loathing Avery all the more, but poor poor Harry. Gotta say I didn't see that coming!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh NO! Poor Harry! and poor Snape too. I am only Hoping Harry dosen't catch something from Avery that Snape cant fix. Great long Chapter.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no.....this is bad. Please update soon!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A week... wow. If Harry misses Snape now, I can only imagine how he will feel after Avery has been "taking care of him" for a week...
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty Nice. Just read though the whole thing. I thought the dream sequences were a lot of fun and kept it from becoming really dark. I not normally into this paring but I thought you did a great job with it and Snape. Keep it up!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice job on this. I love when people can write thoughtful smut (and I use the term only in the best possible way), it is so much better than mindless sex. Thanks for sharing, I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Those two are too funny. "Stop that!" I wonder who's going to catch on first...
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24
Wow!! Lots happening here! Severus really has the patience
of a saint when it comes to Harry and his mouth!! Giving HP the instructions
to slow down and think before speaking is great advise (something that
I really need to do more often!!!), and it ought to be very amusing to watch HP
struggle to do it!!! Still totally love your thoughtful Snape!!
Thanks,
R
Wow!! Lots happening here! Severus really has the patience
of a saint when it comes to Harry and his mouth!! Giving HP the instructions
to slow down and think before speaking is great advise (something that
I really need to do more often!!!), and it ought to be very amusing to watch HP
struggle to do it!!! Still totally love your thoughtful Snape!!
Thanks,
R