rate_review Reviews

oh my god. this story is driving me insane!!! (in a good way.)
seriously, i've been going nuts every day waiting until i could get home and read it.
this story is my addiction!
please write some more chapters, and quickly, or i might die of anticipation.
<3

Chapter 27 "A Bloody Week with Avery"

HA!! Avery so doesn't know what to do with clumsy Harry!!!
Funny how good Harry is at hurting himself!! How come
Avery isn't trying to mess with him?! Did HP knock him in
the nuts or something?!

Good chapter!! Nice that HP can spend some quality "alone time"
with him and his body parts!!! Very steamy masterbation scene,
if only HP realized how much he thinks about "The SEV" whilst
getting off!!! Maybe he'd be a little nicer to him!! HA!!

Thanks,
R

Still a great story. I love how Harry has come to care for Snape's well being without even noticing it. He worry's about him, misses him when he's away, and wants to protect him when the war's over. And how Snape is also coming to like Harry, is becoming more and more comfortable in his presence. Like when he watches him do the double jointed thing with his arms and hands and tells him about how his orgasm wasn't normal. I can't wait for your next chapter, but I saw in your story description something that disturbed me, the mention that there would be death. I don't know if you meant deaths of other characters or Snape or Harry so I'm going to beg you not to kill Snape or Harry. Please don't do that! Looking forward to your next chapter :)

"you're no fun" OMG that's great!

love your story!! chaps are sooo long, that's awesome! you're so creative and i love your snape!

beg for more!

kalisti

do you think you could email me when you update this? its a really good story! my e mail is zombie.sushi on yahoo.

It was all sexy until that mental image popped up and I could not help but laugh my ass off at a sperm covered Snape. ^.^ HAHAHA! nicely done there hun!

*giggle* "thats not normal! *giggle* and harry didn't even get his head. My favorite chapter by far~

Yay new chapter!!^^ Those two are so freakin funny! Despite all the Voldy-will-come-and-kill-you-someday-soon this always makes me laugh. I love it!

Well, that was just too funny. Harry is a brat! (Get it in Snape's hair!!!! and face!!!) priceless, truly. But the funniness aside, the sad undercurrent in the chapter is rather .... well... unsettling. That Snape believes he will not see justice after the war is over. *sigh*. Good point re: Sirius, too (sadly).

Amazing chapter, can't wait to see what you have next since you left it on a cliffhanger. Harry is so clueless about himself