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for Nights of Gethsemane

by starcrossedkayla

schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took me three or so days to read all 35 chapters and I can tell you that it was time well spent. :D This may be the part where I confess my undying love for you. LOL. Alright, down to business. Your fic is excellent. The plot is so...fleshy. Once I began reading, I couldn't stop! I can imagine how much effort and time you've put into creating this masterpiece; I commend you on your work. I seem to NEVER finish the fics I start. They seem to reach a high point and just fizzle out. Wow, I still can't believe it. 35 chapters. *hugs* Anyway, I want to know if I can borrow Snape and have him bring me some of that delicious breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Reading your descriptions of the food made me hungry. ;) What I like best is the fact that I don't know what you are going to do next. The characterization of Snape is GREAT. I love him so much; he is very deep. I also love how you have incorporated lit. into your fic. Can't wait until the next chapter; I do hope you plan to finish this. God, I could go on forever. Happy writing. :D
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter very smart!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two most artistic ways to lie:
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, poor Harry! He's right - Snape really should apologize.
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow...god that must be terrible
My heart was beating so fast, that was amazing and terrifying (and depressing) at the same time.
Harry is amazingly stubborn isn't he
I'm pretty sure this is my favorite Snarry fic...even though I usually go for smut and fluff
Keep up the good work and please update soon XD plzkthx
person Rosei
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30

One of the characteristics that fascinate me is
the pure intelligence you've been able to imbue into
Severus. It makes him sooooo hot in my book!!!

(I am on the level of your Harry!!!! Stupid!!!! HA!!!!)

Like how you've merged the destruction of the cup in and the
further search for more Horcruxes!

Maybe SS ought to leave a few bananas around for HP to practice on!!
Like that these two are so productive when their getting along!!!

Thanks,
R


schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is so sad, I'm holding out hope that this is some kind of cruel trick the deatheaters are playing and that Hermione isn't really dead. Can't wait to read more!
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a wonderful writer, and this is a beautiful story. I know that might sound strange, but I can see how much Snape cares for Harry, even if Harry himself is too...biased to realize.
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tearful stare* You killed Hermione!

...

Although, I'd say you did it very well.
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Mah. Gawd. You are evil! I can't even take it. That had better be some kind of polyjuice switcheroo, or I will just....eh, who am I kidding? At this point, as long as you keep writing I'll keep reading. Fantastic job on Harry and Snape. I think that your descriptions of Harry dealing with desire toward someone who gave him pleasure but someone who wouldn't have otherwise been a source of attraction are fantastic.

But seriously. You can twist the knife girl. Hurts so good!!!!