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At chapter 26 now. I will say that the thought of Harry being left with Avery makes me very weary. That and rather sick to my stomach at the same time. I'm curious now.

Woo! Go Harry! I hadn't expected him to do that to Avery at all. I'm rather surprised with the out come of it.

Wow, chapter 28 was rather amusing towards the end. Severus had it coming to him..kind of literally. Very good chapter.

Yet another good chapter. I really appreciate your writing, you have a lot of talent. I look forward to reading the rest. Though I must sleep, its four in the morning. I'll pick up on chapter 30 tomorrow night.

Must I say that this story is positively wonderful. I have only just finished chapter twenty-one, though I am hooked. I wonder where this story is going. Though I suppose I have to read on to find that out.

Ooh, great chapter - I love any of the ones where they have to "perform" and this was especially sweet somehow. The games that Harry plays in his head, and the great details you give about their attitudes and the way they think . . . really great. Keep it up!

You're back! How long has Harry been prisioner? There is definitely something deeper developing between Harry and Snape yet Harry clings to his relationship with Ginny. Understadably he needs to have something to look forward to but I wonder is Ginny is also clinging to his memory and if she was, how will having Harry displayed as a broken slave affect any lingering feeling she may have for him. This next few chapters promise to be very interesting and I feel that fear/excitement feeling one gets when watching a pivotal scene in a movie, I guess is time for me to cover my face and look between my fingers. Don't keep me in suspense too long.

I'm still here and still reading. Still a great story and I still wait in anticipation for the next chapter!

OK, so yes, a tiny bit shorter than usual, but still, you're right that it's pivitol in showing the growing tenderness and emotion between Snape and Harry... Excellently written (as per usual!) chapter, I absolutely adore this fic; it's nice to read one where one of the characters isn't already in love with the other, and where there's a slow development of emotions and trust between the two. I *really* enjoyed this chapter in particular and can't wait for the next update. ^_^

As always I am loving the story and the stories within the story.

I am hoping that Harry is starting to understand Snape a little more and will soon become more trusting and form a real partnership as opposed to almost always thinking of himself first. He has to destroy Voldemort and he needs Snape to do that, he also needs to grow up to do that. I think Snape really cares about him and that Harry doth protest too much. They will make a formidable team when and if they finally start trusting and opening up to each other. I am looking forward to the change in their relationship especially because you do this all so well! I have loved every chapter and look forward to every one coming!!!!!!! :-)

Thanks for sharing!