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for Nights of Gethsemane

by starcrossedkayla

person wynja
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. And, for the record, I don't quite agree with the critizism... I mean, yes, you have taken it slowly, but that has given something time to grow between the characters that is BELIVEABLE... In a "regular" FF there would be a quick capture-angst-slash-slash-slash-battle-cute end/tragic end (probably cute end... fluffy... another reason that I like this story... it's not fluffy... ;o) ) An ending can be HAPPY without being PINK, if you know what I mean... I quite like the slower pace, but I understand the impatience because FF-readers EXPECT it to be quicker... But I say you're on to something... I think people will REMEBER this story because of it... so DO continue to write! Please!
person KaeXLi
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update..please...must have...snarry
person libldyjean
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story. "watching" the progression of their "relationship" is interesting. thanks for continuing NoG.
person wynja
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, DAMN! *grin* I was as sure as Harry... *mutters at Snape* Poor boy... damn man... ;o)
person Shivawn
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha Harry is so in denial. I love it. Along with this story (loving it, I mean.)
person hsfan
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is jealous of Narcissa!!! That was a good chapter. How long will this story be?
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As usual another remarkable chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
person wynja
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I held my breath for the questioning, and I laughed durign the practise-scene... I love their banter!
person cravedom
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My first impulse after reading this chapter was to ask you for Snapes POV but then I realized that it is not only unnecessary but it would distroy the story. It also made me realize that the story being only Harry's POV is what makes it so good. We see things thru Harry's eyes and since we only know what he knows -not really I would like to think I am a little smarter- we essentially have to learn and grow as he does, and that my dear is way cool.

Your authors note about having to simplify the book for Harry made me smile and think of my sons.

I have not forgotten about Franskestein and sometimes chant "get the book" and then bemoan his forgetfulness. Doesn't he know I am dying of curiosity?
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe what they did to break Harry. Though at the same time I do. That was a good chapter, as well as the ones that followed it. This story has me completely hooked to it. I can't wait for you to update it so we all can read more. I'll be keeping an eye out.