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for Nights of Gethsemane

by starcrossedkayla

person Gina
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story. Harry sure have aot of anger inside of him. I hope that Snape fall in love with Harry sooner! Please let me know when the new chapter come out. thank, an keep up the good work!

Gina
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes Harry really frustrates me, I feel like he doesn't get it. He's always trying to make Snape angry and he doesn't seem to realize how stupid that is. I personally do not feel like your story is slow or boring. It has been really well written from the beginning. I understand that some people don't like to wait until it gets to the good parts, but that doesn't make the story boring. I really am looking forward to reading more and seeing Harry's and Serveru's realtionship develop. Remember that this is your story, and you should set the pace without worrying if other people think it's too slow, it's not. Thanks for updating so often!
person Rainien
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*lol* I've just discovered this fic, so this review is for the whole thing up until now.

FINALLY a canon-friendly Snarry that isn't "Dumbledore trusted you so I will, too and now everything is fine and dandy and I'll trust you and I'm sure you'll show me how to kill old Snakeface so let's get to it, shall we?" Blech. Too OOC for me. But THIS story is something to sink your teeth into. Well done. I can't wait for more.
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Poor Snape too. He seemed really freaked out. true colors showing there. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ Keep writing and i'll happily keep reading.
person Ginnyvere
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great improvement (imho)! I really enjoyed this chapter, it was not a bit boring :D

I'm curious what Snape told Voldemort about Harry's pain and if Voldemort will believe it ^^
person libldyjean
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as always this story continues to keep me enthroled. thank you
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Story is moving along well. Clever comparisons with Wuthering Heights in ch. 31.
person elLouKino
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Oho, lightning.

Have you edited the chapters?
So long ago that I passed through here to review the history, I learned a good time. In another page to read the last chapter uploaded (can not remember the number), so I would like to know which chapters are reprints. To read them again. If you're so kind.

So here I am again looking forward to the new chapter.

Kisses.

Kino
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seemed like an extra-sad chapter, even though I was still glad to read it! I have some private suspicions as to why Snape is acting like a prick . . . I'll be interested to see if they're confirmed. Great job, as usual.
person Ginnyvere
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't missunderstand me, but at the moment I'm a bit bored with the story. There's no progress, no getting nearer to the end. Just the same all the last chapters. Harry fighting Snape, Snape fighting back, training, having sex... and just no progress. Would be great if the final battle would get closer, if you would just skip some of the recurring parts. ^^

Hope my review is adjuvant :)