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for Missing, Presumed Undead

by Utopia

schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 8-10: Gee, it sounds like the three PI
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
person DB1
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@10 OMG i want to read more!!! this story is awesome!! update soon

*DB*
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I hope that the three men will be alright now that they have been made slaves. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: Hermione sounds like she has been her usual, organizing self, but this time she
person Justkiwi
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*purrs*
person Madietta
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise for the story. I wonder if we learn more about how Hermione was actually turned into a vampire? Did she defeat the former King as a vampire or still as a human? Did I just miss that or has that not yet been explained?

I am quite intrigued by your choice of names for the vampires. Where did you come up with them?

Keep up, Madietta
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon that was amazing!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapteers 4-6: The three appear to be excellent investigators, well worth their fees. Unfortunately, they
person Citten
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my dear i just love you! you have great writing skills and imagionation! though you have a thing with the ladies being domionant.
oh well. it is good for spicing things up. i love the fact that she has just adopted this as her new life and become there queen. how did that happen? now will lucius, severus, and darco choose life or death? (i know, i know-pick me, pick me!) i also love the whole queen thing and everybody totally respects her! loved the personal gaurds too.
p.s. late review on chapter 1 (i think) the way that they treat harry and ron-too funny! i loved it!