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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius was wondering the same thing I was. Which is totally cool. I would seriously get lost in a bookstore. It is one of the reason my husband and I carry cell phones.
person jw
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 16 - yup, the bibliphile is adding to the Malfoy library! three hours.... Lucius was very patient (or asleep), for that much time. I do wonder if he'll remember enough of his family history to remember what happened to his "ancestor" and if there is a real nephew still to arrive, and if the portraits will know what's up. his own great-grandpa... thanks for the new chapter!!
person Slytherin_Mistress
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh labib u never fail to amaze me! (it's lady lucius malfoy) i've always loved your stuff. i'm working on a lupin/hermione fic. I'm hoping it is awesome! i might need your help though...might,,,maybe...more than likely! lmao!
thanx

-slytherin mistress
person maddie50
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where to start; I guess it is no surprise that a wizard whose Patronus is a peacock would take such fastidious care over his and Hermione's appearance. He is a gorgeous fussy bugger. The recognition that Lucius was a Malfoy and apparently a possible new heir is quite a twist. Has he taken the place of one of his ancestors or has he just been mistaken for one? Hermione's attitude is certainly ambivalent. She does not want to play the part as Lucius's wife, but she also doesn't want him running off with other women. She doesn't take his non verbal messages well, as she asks the questions that are on her mind while Lucius stands by fuming. They are both so strong willed and each wants to lead, although it is clear that Lucius is more capable to lead in this environment. Their interactions are very amusing and full of the famous U.R.S.T. As I mentioned in LJ, the episode in the room at the Leaky Cauldron was brilliant. Jean.
person Slytherin_Mistress
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH LABIB! LABIB! LABIB! THIS IS LADY LUCIUS MALFOY!...I ERM CANT REMEMBER MY OLD LOGIN STUF! HEH! U NEVER FAIL TO TICKLE MY FANCE WITH UR STORIES! I LOVE LUCIUS! WHAT WOMAN/WITCH IN THIER RIGHT MIND WOULDN'T! PLEASE ID U CAMM E-MAIL ME OR COMMENT ME OR SUMTHING IDK BUT I'M WAITING FOR THAT HOT SWEATY STEAMY NO SRTINGS ATTACHED SEX!!!!
person Utopia
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Though, on the subject of hair, the back of mine (past about 5" grows crimped! Masses of 'perfect' little zig zags! Nobody's managed to explain that one yet.

He he! I love the hackney lack of suspension and a love of pot holes! Oh, their bottoms must be so sore by now!

Well, at least Lucius has learnt the error of his ways; and the clever cookie might just be able to put 2 and 2 together and realise that if he behaves that he won't end up in Azkaban!

Wizards and Witches have a long life span - is it possible for them to catch up with the 'future' - all be it as geriatrics? But in this time/universe/veil-thingy, if that's the case, will Lucius Malfoy be born, as well as Hermione??

Ah... so the current Malfoys (and by current I mean the future for Herms and Lu - and now I'm confused...) aren't direct heirs! So, I can see our Malfoy killing off the real heir and instating himself as master.

I thought the 7th level of Hell was all ice; and that the people in there are of the worst kind, trapped in the ice. As the ice causes pain they cry, the tears freeze and cause more pain, so they cry more. Isn't the book mentioned completely in verse? I can't remember.

I like a good romance novel, but I can keep a straight face while reading them, and if the covers aren't on show, nobody's the wiser! My other half can only tell (apparently) by my breathing! And quite happily lets me finish chapters so he can 'take advantage of the literature' lol.

I'm sure Hagrid's hut is quite nice...

*giggle* Lucius
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent revenge by Hermione. And I like that Lucius feels a bit guilty about his behavior. Although, I'm still fascinated by the fact that Gringotts sent out news that the new Malfoy heir was coming. Are they going to cross paths or were they replaced? I actually think this build up will lead to some amazing sex.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant beyond brilliant! I *LOVED* when Hermione used the ointment to...calm... Lucius... And how interesting that the shopkeeper (chemist?) knew Lucius as a Malfoy! (not that there is any denying it when you look at him.. lol) I love how you have written him; he really is conceited and cocky at all times. Fabulous! but my questions would be either 1) is he possibly his own descendent or 2) is this an alternate reality created by the veil to cater to the needs of those who passed through??? And I would LOVE to see Hermione get the upper hand a little more often. Perhaps in the bedroom? muwahaahaha

Great story! I can't wait to read the rest!
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aha, Lucius foiled by Hermione is a good Lucius. I can't wait to see how he retaliates. I was really touched by the scene when they first went into the Potions shop. I like how they keep misreading each other, but can still come to an understanding. I wonder what they will find at Malfoy manor, and why is everything set up for them to take over new lives? Interesting questions.
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I was just as surprised as Hermione and Lucius when they were addressed as Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy in the apothecary, well done! Lucius is such a terrible tease. I loved how you didn't make Hermione give in right away. Her strong will is what really makes her character I think. I'm excited to see what happens once they reach the solicitors.