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Woo Hoo! He's back and in working order! Things are really going quite easily for them. I wonder if the veil was prepared for their influx, and if so, what impact Hermione will have on future Malfoy's ideologies if any. Love the half-sensitive Lucius, and the VERY sensitive (at least sexually) Hermione. Great job as usual.

i'm a little confused. is L going to be his own great-great-great grandfather? is this like a paralell universe? and they have no clue do they? ehh, either i love it and i eagerly await the next chapter. i have a bad feeling the next chapter is not going to include any sex for L and H.

The story is going swimmingly! It would be a trip if Dobby were there at the estate. Great going and update where and when you can.

So they're going to have a palatial mansion to live in now, eh? Lovely funny chapter - I liked Hermione's distracting thoughts about ice-cream, leading to lots of hilarious innuendo, and Lucius saying that to compare his sexual technique with 'boinking' was like calling the pyramids a pile of rocks. Ha ha, he certainly has all the lines.

Of course the arrogance will come creeping back. But that's why he has Hermione....to take him down a peg or two when he gets a wee bit too big for his britches. Okay, that just sparked some naughty thoughts....lol. So Lucius is basically trapping her into being his wife in the magical world....so unless Hermione decides to forsake magic and live with muggles....she's a Malfoy. Great great update! I can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon!!

My hair doesn't play by anyone's rules without a full can of hairspray - so I leave it be. Chemicals are not my bag. And thanks for clearing up the circles of Hell thingy, its a long time since that snip of info was needed (I think it was a pub quiz and I just randomly knew the info about the innermost level because it had been referred to in another book).

*snort* his sense of decoration a bit skewed (LOVE that word) after Azkaban? Nah... he just doesn't want to tell her that he knows exactly what's in vogue at the time! lol!

he he! It demeans the whole artistry of the multi-faceted intimacy of good sex. you can tell she rubbed that numbing potion into his naughty bits,those are VERY long words for an aroused bloke! lol!

Oooh, the cone and 2 scoops is just baaaaaaaaaaad, LaBib! lol. *cringe*

Is Slytherin Sin different to sin in the other houses? Or is it just a case that the (trouser) snakes do it better?

Ah! Lucius has some blood in his brain that isn't attempting to defy the numbing potion! He likes her interest, but knows that interest might just go and play with the fairies at any point. Does he understand what happened in her past? I know he's a very sexual, sensual man - but he's dealing with a frightened rabbit in headlights in Hermione... when was the last time Lucius handled something so innocent? (Well, innocent in the sense she's not up to his callibre)

Has Lucius thought to transfigure her a wedding ring to back up what everyone else is saying? Or is it not a magical thing? Its also nice to see people referring to Hermione as his lovely wife - weather it be just manners or truth, it's going to give her a bit more of a confidence boost... though claiming the Malfoy sir name was probably more tongue in cheek on her part, though will that make the legal papers void because they aren't married?? *and now I'm confused*

Position and responsibilities... see pages of Kama Sutra and repeat until shagged out? lol. I don't think the lawyer meant that though! lol.

What about the REAL heirs? Are they going to meet with an 'unfortunate' accident? (Oh, and geriactric Lu would be funny! I got half way over the hill, someone has to get old Lu!)

and all the above was said later... maybe I shouldn't review as I read?? I just repeat myself... :(

Thing is, society won't see her as anything other than a pureblood... if her manners and backstabbing are top notch then the world will be none the wiser!

Kitten... makes her sound cute and non-dangerous. And him saying it sleepily will probably get back to the social circle through Mr. Blott. Especially as he spent three hours letting her run around the books! Society will pronounce him whipped. (Or whatever the term may be at the time! lol)

Hermione and I are kindered spirits! 'Not now darling, I'm reading' is more common than not now, I have a headache! lol! my other half is practically a bibliophobe and leaves me to it (or at least until the end of the chapter).

Another smashing chapter. 11/10 for it.

Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I think that Lucius should be the true heir to the Malfoy fortune. Maybe it was meant to happen by going through the veil.

Hi LaBib!!

CLIFFIE!!!!! You are a cruel person, you! I wonder where the Malfoy house is? Is it somewhere Hermione has been before? Ooooh! Don't make us wait too long...I have high blood pressure, you see, and it just climbs when you don't post soon. I'm only joking...but I am enraptured by your story, and each review makes it feel like my birthday! Update soon!!

A girl has to have her priorities...books first. My curiosity about the readiness of this time has me checking every day for an update. You twist a tale like nobody's business.