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Did he actually hear her apology, or was he stewing too much? I can see getting lost like that, I read at the table when I'm alone, and when my husband is home, I sometimes forget my manners about what not to do at the table. (He works long hours, and we don't often eat together, it is always a treat when we do). I like that he went after her and made her feel safe. The fall out from this is going to be big, isn't it? I still wonder about the true heir.

Yahoo! You updated! It always makes my day when I see a new chapter for this story.

I have to tell you though, someone needs to bonk Hermione over the head. What is she thinking reading a book, when she could be having a magical candlelit dinner with sexy Lucius Malfoy? Is she daft or something? I mean, I love reading too, but you can bet if I was having dinner with Lucius, preparing for a night of amazing sex, I would be tossing that book to the side and giving his adorableness my full attention.

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After thinking about it, I feel like I was rather harsh with Hermione in my review. So I am retracting some of my statement. After all, she has been through a lot and nothing is familiar to her in their new world. So seeing all those wonderful books probably made her feel like she had a little piece of home. So it's no wonder she would be so drawn to them

Ah, where to begin . . . with the vermin, I think. That was hilarious. A sure way to convince Lucius that he had not considered the ramifications of utilizing the room at the Inn--vermin in his hair. LOL. The best line IMHO in this chapter contains the phrase: "artistry of the multi-faceted intimacy of good sex." This apparently is Lucius's definition of his skills in the bedroom. LOLOL. Now I am down to Lucius's personal problems: Apparently the brothels have a grapevine so he cannot go out of the neighborhood, if necessary, for an emergency rut. And, the magical difficulty of maintaining a glamour while having an orgasm. LOL. The final topper of the chapter is Lucius calling her the endearment "[d]earling" asking discretely for her full name and Hermione withholding it momentarily to make Lucius sweat. OMG. Those two are either going to hex each other or screw each other to death.

I nearly forgot what I had asked you in the last review. LOL. But now I remember, and I guess I will have to wait for the answer to show up in the later chapters. I liked the light humor in this chapter. Lucius being jealous of a book, it's so laughable.

Great chapter...please update soon xxx

interesting :)

i like it :)

lazy lurker ya know :P

but i do enjoy reading this story!

Ohh, I wasn

He's doing a sterling job there - OK, the Disapparition in the library might have looked like a stumble, but even that worked to his advantage. Hermione realises that she would be lost without him, even if she has every book in the Malfoy collection for company.

I like their scene in the old lodgings - they seem very evenly matched, and are able to be completely honest with each other (must be an unusual feeling for Lucius). Mind you, I don't think she's taken on board Lucius' plans for her womb yet, has she? Could be controversial!

Great work!

Lucius with 'the snugglies'. Too funny, yet kinda hot. Well, maybe not hot, but cute. Can Lucius be described as cute? It seems wrong somehow.