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Ok, i love the story so far and am enjoying how it develops. The only thing that's really sticking in my mind at the moment is the word "fanny" you use as, i assume, for but, arse, bum, buttocks etc. I'm from Ireland and the word fanny actually means to us female genitalia or vagina and you can very well imagine when you said save hermione and lucius' fanny....i found it decidedly odd and it wouldn't leave me alone. I'm really not bothered by it, it doesn't offend me, but as you are writing about British people an especially in the past, they wouldn't say that to mean but or arse etc. It's just a little thing but i just had to say it as it was annoying the hell out of me, especially since it's such a small thing. But other than that, can't wait for the next chapter!

Wolf

Once again another fabulous update m'dear. I must say that Hermione's theory is rather intriguing. Though I admit it makes me wonder about Sirius. If it were me, I'd test some of theories by looking for him, see if there's any trace of him.... And daytime? Oh honey, I'd do it in the daytime with the blinds up and the windows open if it meant I got to have Lucius. LOL I can't wait for more!!

Ohhh!! Can't wait for 'tonight'!

A thinking Veil ... I like the twist. The idea of them working together to save their world but not knowing how is great. Thanks for making my evening.

The

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

"...he quietly rocked her as they stood there." - a caring and concerned Lucius, a wonderful thing but not something he lets others see normally.

"Hermione burrowed her head deeper into Lucius' chest..." - all this affection and no lemons?? lol. - oh wait, she noticed him stirring against her... =)

i like that she is trying to be fair to his feelings and needs as well as her own. ok, the most important factor is him - and he had saved her and pledged to protect her...i wonder...the rest of the world (in the time they are in) consider them married...will they actually have to do so before proclaiming to love one another further down the road?

oh, thats rightm the house is from two hundred years before there time...and she suggests there are things lucius can discover along with her. will they find anything to help them return home?

i love lucius' arrogant boasting - it just makes me smile!

Hmmm...i have to admit to not thinking the way Hermione obviously has been. But its an intersting theory. i bet she's right...thats how smart she is.

'Happy Harlot House' *snorts loudly*

If Hermione is right in her thinking, about the Veil using htem to change the way the future unfolds does this also mean that Voldemort will not come into existence, or will he be ineffectual?

As for my stories - You can see Stealing The Prize had chapter 6 added. ir eally don't thinkthere is much moe than 1 or 2 chapters left. as for Until You - once i get out the last part of Stealing The Prize I will go back to concentrating on that as well as my Draco/Hermione story Helping, Hurting, Healing.

So lemons next? And please bring Draco in....for me???? =)

oh i like it! (the authors note that is.) although your response to my inquare is making me very, very scared. what are you planning? (completely retoracaly question.) :) so any way to speed you up on posting the next chapter sooner? like hearing a sad tale of moi, like having my car window smashed and my purse and camera (with pictures) stolen out of my car on sunday while at church? well its just a thaught and hope. :] well until next time my dear.

ch 17 - thank you for the update! I'm actually not looking forward to the lemon - I'm more curious about how Lucius can be the 'real' Malfoy heir (his own g-g-grandpa), and if he's going to try to do anything to prevent the future damage to the Manor and his family. leave himself a note - 'Don't join any group called Death Eaters' and 'hide the jade columns before you go to Azkaban.' looking forward to the next, and glad that Lucius came after Hermione to snuggle with her in the hidey-hole!

Hey, this is really good, I'm enjoying it a lot. I'm definitely in suspense about whether or not they're ever going to be able to return to their own time and fix the problems there. Thanks for sharing this - I can't wait to read more!