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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No update today? I need my BtV fix! I'm gona have withdrawel symptoms at this rate! Hope everything's OK, and it isn't anything serious causing the delay! And if it is something serious, don't worry about it, post when its all sorted!
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh back in time!! This plot is so fantastic I'm hyperventilating, LOL.
But I hope, despite former really bad relationships, that Hermione won't let anyone, Lucius too, step all over her. I KNOW you never do a doormat-Hermione, but it just felt like when she broke down and cried and things like that that she'd be so vulnerable and week. But she's showing her true colors now, I think, hope..
GREAT JOB.
(I'm reviewing in my ultra bad hangover, and will probably for the next few chapters, so they won't be good) lol
But I hope, despite former really bad relationships, that Hermione won't let anyone, Lucius too, step all over her. I KNOW you never do a doormat-Hermione, but it just felt like when she broke down and cried and things like that that she'd be so vulnerable and week. But she's showing her true colors now, I think, hope..
GREAT JOB.
(I'm reviewing in my ultra bad hangover, and will probably for the next few chapters, so they won't be good) lol
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've noticed you tend to make Lucius more brilliant in advanced magic then you do Hermione (the wandless obliviate) Not that I am complaining, I love anything that makes Lucius more hot, but Hermione should be as advanced too!! In some areas at least.. (I'm talking about magic, not what you're thinking) lol.
Hint hint for another story where Hermione has some ultra superior advanced magic stuff!
Loving everything so far!!!
Hint hint for another story where Hermione has some ultra superior advanced magic stuff!
Loving everything so far!!!
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, FANTASTIC. I love it!
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing. You're amazing. I have no questions about anything, nothing's confusing me, and that's a compliment. You always explain everything, every little detail. I'm a silly perfectionist and I want to know everything.
Details like the hair and grass tickling him, the smell and scenery, not all authors (especially fanfic authors) have details and explanations in their stories like you do. BUT it's only chapter two, so I will read on!! (and continue to review ;))
Details like the hair and grass tickling him, the smell and scenery, not all authors (especially fanfic authors) have details and explanations in their stories like you do. BUT it's only chapter two, so I will read on!! (and continue to review ;))
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh make Lucius laugh more! I love a laughing Lucius and I don't care what kindof laugh it is; happy, evil, sarcastic WHATEVER :D
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bluestocking - great word. My best guess is Gretna Green!
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So he's dragging her off to get married? Hee. And I love the way she thinks, her mind is so much fun. I'd be living in the Malfoy library as well. Although I might be more inclined to having my way with the Master of the house.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 19 - (looks sadly at end of chapter....) is that all there is? sigh... like Lucius, I am resigned, but where is he taking her to calm down her nerves? to the brothel where she can talk to the 'professionals'? looks like he's going to have a tough time getting her to marry him. I'm still looking forward to your time-travel/paradox explanation about Lucius being his own gggg-grandpa! thank you very much for this chapter; you always keep me on edge.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you bring us to pleasure and let us ache. I wonder why Lucius is being so patient? Will we see a less reticent Hermione in the next chapter? I hope.