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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Booyahhh! I was so right. LOL Great update...Lucius...sigh, he is a sly one. But admittedly that was rather a sweet gesture on his part. Although it was also rather to his benefit as well. But that's just one of the many reasons why we love him. I can't wait for more, especially as I'm rather curious to see just how much of dinner Lucius makes it through before he becomes a "caveman" and acts on his "predatory male" instinct. Oh and just for the record, if Hermione chickens out again I volunteer to take her place! LOL
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I love it! Lucius doesn't even bother to propose - just hustles Hermione into the church and lets her get on with it! They even get up to a few shenanigans on consecrated ground, the naughty pair. Mmmm, I can just see Lucius, resplendent in his groomly finery. Poor (?) Hermione certainly has a lot to think about, but I'm sure she'll come round once she realises that Lucius knocks all those unsexy Gryffindors and Ravenclaws into a cocked hat.

Delightful chapter and dare I hope that the next one covers the consummation????

(Sorry to carp, but the Veil isn't doing its job properly if it hasn't told Lucius that men didn't wear wedding rings before 1900.)
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(That's the year 1900, not seven o'clock in the evening, lol. Mind you, they're wizards, so you can always say that they have different traditions. Scrub my last point - carry on!)
person Citten
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! you most surely are forgiven for a minute, but now i would like for you to have the next chapter up. and dont just do the dinner either. ;) you know what we all want to get to it already! :) i love that she just accepted the fact that she has just married into a family of slytherins well now i really want to see what house there children are going to be in! :) but all in good time. first the wedding night!!!
person Josie
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the sexual frustration! How's Hermione going to hold up with her libido awake after allt this time.. ON WITH THE READING.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Lucius is a such a smoothy. I really believe he could sell Viagra to the Vatican.

Hermione didn't put up much of a fight. That girl is so whipped.

Oh, the leather-clad hands did not go un-noticed. Thank You. Thank You. Thank You.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay...a wedding! i had a feeling this might happen. Another great chapter, La Bib. I like that we saw a spark of the old Hermione when she changed obey to cherish without even thinking about it. I don't have any questions at the moment though, as i hope i am right about what the next chapter should contain...lol. ;-) Looking forward to reading more....
person pittwitch
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Women of the era fainted with frightening regularity because of their constricted breathing ala stays and corsets laced much too tight for fashion. The lack of oxygen did them in.

Caveman, oh yes please, Caveman!

ROFLMAO - Viagra at the Vatican -- but given the Church's sordid history I worry that it might be a good seller in some quarters. No, no, won't go there.

Wedding night! Hallelujah! Hallelujah!
person amyfeddy
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your comment for chapter 19 saying that there were no lemons in that chapter made me almost not want to read it, but like I said it would have been a terrible punishment to have missed that chapter. Especially since it had a nice little cliffy that led to chapter 20, which was also very good. You just write the sexual tension so well, and their characters are so right on with each other. I will wait patiently for the lemons, because whining and threats don't work. ;)
person Jesse
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!!! Great chapter. I loved the snake rings. 'Cherish' haha!! Can't wait for more, you do an amazing job on this.