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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person kitty08
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well I think this is one of the best stories I ever read. I especially liked that you updated regularly and that the story had a plot with interesting themes. so I loved it and I hope you will write something new soon!!
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot wedding night, I'm still drooling over it, boy I'm surprised that my computer is still working with all the drool on it :) Well I got through chapter 25 so I am half way there! The story and plot are heating up, lets hope I can read more tomorrow.
person Citten
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
honey i loved the story!!!! i love that they have a whole hord of children ('sides they can afford it!) :) it makes me happy! :) so i guess i will just have to wait for the next great story. :) i had tons of fun reading this stroy and i may just have to read it again. ;)
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Got through two more chapter!! That is 20 chapters in one day, that is a new personal record for me. Ooh things are getting interesting, I like that there seems to be a unknown force guiding them through this time up. Very sneaky of Lucius to hurry up and marry her, she was also very sneaky replacing obey with cherish (that's what I did!) Well the rest will have to wait till tomorrow.
person Rini
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I went on and saw
person doodle
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are truly a story teller. Weaving the threads without the reader being overly aware. I am in awe of your talent. Were St. Merlin & the Veil the same thing? You refered the Veil as a "he". Thank you for making many of my Sunday mornings joyous!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice touch there with Dr Filch. It's good to see him prosper, in a funny way.

Fabulous ending to a lovely story; I did enjoy Lucius and Hermione's reunion sex veeery much :D.

I should bloody well think Snape recovered the use of his right arm; I'd find him a bit dull to write about without it, heh.

Thanks for a pleasurable fifty chapters and power to your elbow for fifty more in the next story.
person sweettiff_14
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job, and a wonderful epilogue. I always imagine that labor and delivery is so much easier for witches. Lucky witches! It was a fun and sweet ride and I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I love it!!!
*throws roses and gives a standing ovation!*

Well done!! I'd love to see you do a Hermione/Severus fic.

Any thoughts???
If ya have a chance....danni@dublin.ie

xxxxxx
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I found a hour to finally sit down and start reading this wonderful story. I've only got through the first 10 chapters so far, but I am so involved that I didn't even notice that the movie I was watching was over and nothing was on the TV Lol. Very interesting story line, of course I want to know what happen to the muggles to make them turn on the magic folk, especially in their own family. Whoever this Master is definitely has a bad gruge against all things magic. I am very curious why the Veil transported them to old London, I am going to assume there is a reason, but I could be wrong. Lucius seems to be adapting well in this time period. Scary moments for Hermione, still shaking because of what happened and almost happened to her. I can't wait to read more, but I can't do it right now because my son is up from his nap, maybe I can squeeze a few more chapters in tonight. :)