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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice build up, I think Lucius made a good choice seeing how poorly hermione reacted and she hadn't even drank anything yet. No hexing, i'm no trelawney but I forsee lemons. It's good that you don't give in to whining, especially since you will give us a large reward later, but only if we behave.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am not going to kill you yet. you just better make i really good and LONG in the next chapter. besides i know that once you get them going they are like rabbits they just dont stop. (now it will be even more funny if they reproduce like rabbits. :) ) well do post and SOON!!!
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just had to look up what a hipbath was. Not very roomy at all. Nice, very nice.
Lucius is extremely confident for a man who's been in Azkaban for all those years.
Lucius is extremely confident for a man who's been in Azkaban for all those years.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaaah! What a place to stop! But you knew that already, of course.
I love Lucius' disorderly relatives - I wonder if any of the Malfoy malcontents are going to appear to stir up trouble later? And poor thing, with his horrible historical bathroom - not the most enticing prospect.
But what happens next certainly IS an enticing prospect - they've both wound each other up to a point where they're expecting some kind of extravaganza performance - and I think the readers know exactly how they feel ;).
I love Lucius' disorderly relatives - I wonder if any of the Malfoy malcontents are going to appear to stir up trouble later? And poor thing, with his horrible historical bathroom - not the most enticing prospect.
But what happens next certainly IS an enticing prospect - they've both wound each other up to a point where they're expecting some kind of extravaganza performance - and I think the readers know exactly how they feel ;).
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, SOON isn't soon enough so considered yourself hexed!! :) No, not quite at that point yet, although I'm close. ;) Can't wait for more.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bickering is just foreplay for some couples. Makes the coming together so much more fun. Soon is hopefully soon!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look for to reading the next one.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius, no modern bathroom to suit his fastidious nature but he seems willing to work around it. Atlas is great by the way, small role though he has. I like that Lucius seems to become more interested in Hermione as the story goes on. It
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione really needs a little boost in the confidence department. I hope Lucius will continue as he has with her. It's just sad thinking that the two men she was with destroyed her so thoroughly. Lucius seems to need Hermione to balance his more ruthless tendencies and give him something to strive for both emotionally and intellectually. Soon, you say. Very, or two or three more chapters?
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It seems Hermione may have caught on to Lucius' worry about his prowess. That is hilarious. The two complement it each other so well.