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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday and OMG yes its finally THE chapter coming up.

Once again i have to admit how wonderfully written this story is and it really leaves me in awe.

Thank you so much for this...fantastic fantastic story.

Love
Jocy
person Shiv5468
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Teasing isn't nice
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Goddess you do delight in torturing me don't you? And I must admit that every time Lucius thinks about his "new leaf program" I laugh a bit. But Hermione referring to his erection a "periscope" made me almost snort my tea through my nose. Great update. I can't wait for the next chapter as you say that it is.....The One. lol Hope to read more soon!
person Terrie
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, after that hot bath, I need a cold shower!! Great story line. This idea has really intrigued me and although I'm very much enjoying the development of their relationship, I'm also anxious to see where the plot takes us. Thank you.
person bennacienna@yahoo.com
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK seriously, it was cute and all that there was a lot of 'plot' buildup, but I think we're all ready for the main event now. Please hurry it up.
Cool story by the way.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O So hot. Lucius is so delicious....lol
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. I loved that. Playing in a bath or shower with your lover is a lot of fun. Although I don't know how comfortable it would be in a hip bath. I'm guessing that after next chapter, Hermione's idea of sex will have changed.
person Pajama Pants
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday! I think that bath water will boil if they stay in there to much longer!
person Josie
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BAH I WANTED TO READ SOME ACTION *goes to a corner and sulks*
I won't come out until I see some action between those two!!!

But yes, I really did enjoy starting my reviewing career. It was a little hard at first, and still is because of my tendency to babble on, there's always so much I want to say after reading each of your chapters but if I said everything on my mind it would be as long as a chapter!

One thing on my mind though, have you ever considered writing Abraxas? I fell in love with him after reading a story on GrangerEnchanted.. I know he's old (and dead) but there's so much you can write around insanely hot, dead wizards. Hmm.. my brain is overflowing right now! :D
Update ASAP, pleeaassseee *sugar coated smile and puppy eyes*

PS: I'm from Iceland, so you've got a major far distance reader and reviewer!! Just sharing that info :)
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely LaBib, I