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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, lemonicious. Ha ha at 'berried' treasure.

It's good that they had the conversation about children, though I'm not sure about the timing of it.

I liked the smooth moves from bath to hearth rug to bed; Lucius hasn't lost any of his bedroom artistry during those 12 years in Azkaban.

Well, it was worth the wait! I know I'm going to love hearing about their adventures both in and out of the marital bed now.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Shakes snoring man beside her)

"Are you awake?"

"I am now!"

"Excellent." Sounding a little like Monty Burns.

"Umph, what are you doing? I'm sleeping!"

"Well, just lie there and let me have a go."

....................................................

(Several minutes later)

"Yes, yes, yes, oh god, Luuucius!"

"What!!"

Oops.


Well worth the wait Labib. I'm hoping Lucius puts his morning erection to good use.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, that was really hot. I enjoyed it, not only because of the sex, but because of the growing affection and respect (yes respect) they have for each other. I can see it, and it really was worth the weight.
person pam
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi LaBib,

Just wanted to drop by and say that I love your stories. In one of the reviews, i read you were celebrating your birthday in the Cheesecake Factory in San Fran? I just wanted to let you know that I'm in the area as well. I live across the bay but I work and went to school in SF.
person Citten
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) hahahahaha :) i think you just like to keep us on our toes! :) but i know that those 22 chapters worth was worth the last two chapters, maybe even three! :) well the contrceptive question could have come at a better time but hey what can you say. i like what was said and that they explained things to each other so there was no misunderstaning--cause i hate it when that happens and there is no need for that in many cases. well that was wonderful and now i will be waiting for the next chapter happily!!! :)
person Muffy
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A lovely wedding night, it played out beautifully. Enjoyable read. Thanks.
person Tenar10r
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness for extra towels! (No dry-cleaning guarantee indeed!)
person pittwitch
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delicious, piping, steaming hot, on a sterling silver platter. What a late night snack!
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect. I loved it! And now that Hermione knows what sex is SUPPOSED to be like, well....let's just say Lucius is probably going to be given a run for his money. Which will most likely work in his favor, she'll be more open to his more....creative.....ideas. And let's face it....the man's an artist. Incredible update, I can't wait for more!
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely addition dearie! I must say that if I had a man like Lucius I don't think I'd ever get out of bed or the tub or... well you get the idea. The lemons were fabulous, very well written. I liked that Lucius was considerate enough to consult Hermione about contraception; it just wouldn't do for Lucius to get her sprogged up before telling her his stance on half blood babies. I couldn't help but giggle when Lucius fainted though. Overall, this update was brilliant and I can't wait to see what the deal with the Veil is.