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I have to say I am disappointed in that chapter. It seemed to be a 'filler' rather than an actual chapter. I was looking forward to something to happen.. anything! However, I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.. so as disappointed as I was in the chapter, your writing is amazing and I love the story.

I'm guessing Lucius forgot that Hermione has a rather prodigious mind? The imagination is one of the sexiest things there is, and if she is willing to stretch hers, he shouldn't be surprised. Anyway, I love that he was pleasantly surprised. I'm looking forward to them trying out those paintings.

Well, I wouldn't condemn him as being self-serving. I mean, Lucius is going to include Hermione in these acts, isn't he? I'd say he's giving greater service than expected, if only there were more of him to around for us fangirls. Yummy Lucius and his nearly sentient, one-eyed monster. Great images, and the humor was just right for the mood of the chapter.

What a lovely story. I have to say that you are one of the few authors who can write a good Hermione/Lucius. I'm more of a Hermione/Tom/Voldemort of Hermione/Severus fan, but I think your way to write about Lucius and Hermione are very... unique and interesting. And this plot is very puzzling and thrilling. Time travelling is always a very interesting subject and I think you explain everything just fine :) The fact that you also spend time adding old english words are just... well it makes the story more alive and funny.
I guess a lot of people have said this to you, but it was about time Hermione and Lucius had sex! I have been reading this story on my free time the last few days and I thought it would happen a lot sooner! Ah, well, there is nothing like a litte UST.
Have a nice evening!

Wonderful story! I like the premise of the Veil possibly being either a massive time-turner or doorway to parallel dimension. I also enjoy the way you write Lucius... In fact, I can honestly say that it was original having HIM be the one to pass-out at the end (ref. Ch.23), instead of having Hermione doing so - very refreshing. Hahaha! I look forward to reading more when your life, time, and muse permit an update.

Thank you so much for sharing this!

*dribble*

Too good for words, I can't say anything that would actually do 23 justice.

chapter 22 - squeee!! my bday is 6-3 too, so you just gave me a bday gift. (ahem... the gift of living vicariously thru Hermione....)

ch 23 - ahh.... I see you had a lovely bday playing with Lucius, commanding him: "Up, periscope!" (snert!) the scene was absolutely perfect, except for his horrible sense of timing. NOT a good time to ask about contraception!!! I was afraid that the chapter would end right there with another fight, so I was relieved that they went on. phew! thank you, and may you enjoy many more bday celebrations and years with your own Lucius!

Squee! The chapter we

Oooh! Chocolate, lemonade and a wink