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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person LadyofEros
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just as an FYI, in the Regency Era tobacco 'snuff' was snorted amongst the wealthy, not cigars which became more common in Edwardian times.
person RogueVampire
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew got through all fifty chapters in about two days. Brilliantly done. Nice mix of smut and plot. I would say that the French maid part was my favorite. Just wanted to show my appreciation!
person tsorg
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, what an amazing story. I absolutely LOVE your stories!!! Your Lucius Malfoy make me simply drool, I have to go fan myself after reading your chapters. I love the fact that you have him sooo, well, so well-endowed and obviously so erotically gifted! It was your story, "The Wedding" that finally inspired me to post a story. I also wanted to thank you for your wonderful reviews, especially the spelling/grammar corrections! Thank you, I can't wait for your next story, in your last review you mentioned a chapter 15 having hooks?!!!!

T
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was able to read through chapter 34 before my son woke from his nap. The ball was a great chapter, of course I love balls you've painted a great picture on what its like to be an Alpha Malfoy. LOL. I need to stop reading the lemons when my husband is at work all day, LOL by the time he gets home I'm...you know what I think I might have the advantage in that situation. LOL well I must now tend to my son. More reading later.
person sbrande
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a marvellous story! I can see all the thought and research that you put into it, and it makes this story even better. It was rec'd by a friend of mine (as I usually read SS/HG) but I am glad I took the time to read this.

Thanking you so very much for writing it.

Love Sonia :)
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I'm back to reading. I got through chapter 30. Very interesting about the Squibs, things are starting to come together, or raise more questions. LOL I couldn't stop laughing at Margaret just kept digging Lucius deeper and deeper into a hole, but he managed to get himself out of it. Chapter 30 was HOT! I love dominate, but still caring, Lucius. I can't for the life of be picture Hermione in a french maid outfit, when I read that he wanted to dress that way I couldn't stop laughing. I can only image what her accent sounded like. Of course the spanking was my favorite part :) Let see if can read some more today.
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue:


Ok, somehow I missed that this had been concluded. Not sure how exactly, but I did. It started off full force with a nice, calm center and then a somewhat stormy end for our favorite couple. It was peppered with a fair amount of smut and comedy and a nice dash of mystery to go with it. I love how they ended up with a large family, I always imagine the two of them with a little army of Malfoys, not sure why I assume that not only was Narcissa a frigid bitch but also one who didnt appreciate the joys of having a brood(I speak as a mom of 3 and the joyous chaos that is my life). Excellant work and hopefully we shall see you again soon!


Happy Writing!
S_G
person Robyn Hawkes
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed the story and loved how you tied everything up in the epilogue.
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it's done! Gone! Finnished! Over! No More! The end of the road! (sobs)

Thank you for such a fantastic read, Labib. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

I think my favourite parts were at the start (the boarding house and the brothel). I also learned alot too. I even used 'Slippery Sex Sap' in a sentence recently. Mum was stunned when I told her I borrowed the term from a Librarian :) Dr. Filch had me giggling in the epilogue and I'm glad Snape was mentioned. I especially liked that he was never short of a bed buddy.

Thanks again, Labib. Look forward to reading your newbie.

So, about that 'Smutty Thesaurus'..... LOL.
person Damiana
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue---

*weeps* I am sad that it is over but quite satisfied with your ending and your epilogue. So I guess I'm not really sad just already looking back on this story with nostalgia.

Good job on this one LaBib! I look forward to reading the next one. :D