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OK...so I generally dont read or review until a fic is done....I was burned one too many times with unfinished fics. Anyhow, I needed to read something, anything to take my mind off of the horror that has become my RL....it is an interesting read. Still curious about this New Voldemort and if the story will ever get back to that. Sorry Im not going into more detail....just not very chatty lately..Ill keep reading and posting when I can.

Happy Writing,
SG

My poor mind is just teeming with possibilities for that evil veil -- and I've been chewing on my lip since the start wondering just who this Master is. I'm leaning toward a disenfranchised wizard for some reason. Who else would wield that power?!? I know, I'm probably out in left field more than normal. I loved the bath and the sex, and was laughing out loud at the mental image of Hermione wandering around the lair peering at the time's wizard porn. Is the poor chit leaning toward vampirism -- only wanting to play in the dark? C'mon Lucius put some "muscle" into it and disengage her brain!

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

oooh.. I have often wondered over the course of this if the only reason these two got together was because of the Veil and it would appear that they are just as confused as I am! And I love how it seems that every conversation is going back to sex... He loves sex and we love him, so bring it on! lol But why was he in the Department of Mysteries that day? Why was he in the Ministry? I am sure we will find out eventually, but do we want to know? Was he stalking her? Trying to figure out a way even then to break her of her celebate ways??? lol Conniving little Slytherin he is, I wouldn't doubt it for a minute.. hehehe

"Would you recognize evil if it came and gave you a lap dance?

Hiya! Just catching up n all the new (and awesome!) chapters that you posted.

In chapter 18:"She admitted to herself that she wanted to dive off head first with him, learning what all that glorious equipment could do for her, but something she couldn

You will be happy to know that I very purposefully set down my tea while I read this chapter. Oh Lucius and Hermione. Those two....they constantly manage to insult the other over the silliest things. Hermione was right, I mean come on, Lucius can't honestly say that he didn't deserve prison for his war crimes. Or, maybe he can, but then again that would be coming from the man that thought he was on the 'right' side of the war. It's all based on perspective. Great update, I can't wait for more, oh and Hermione really should be more careful about issuing challenges about the bedroom, whether the challenge was meant or not. Hope you update again soon!!

Fabulous as always! I can

Why you little tease :P Hehe, Hermione ogling her dear husband... well, who wouldn't? I like the way you discribed Lucius' body, you really have a thing with words... you are a wordwitch (I don't know if you can say so in english, but since I'm not english...) I wonder what those paitings showed... we already know about the foursome but... hm... there aren't many other hot guys around (which in my world means Severus and Voldemort/Tom arean't around), so I guess that will not happen... too bad...
Haha, I guess Lucius can see himself as blessed :P I think Hermione's curiousity will push away her shy side... at least I hope so... I really hope so... I like smuty stories :) But not just only smut... but you seem to have a very interesting plot going on, so I'm not worried... but it feels like your story is just in the begining! Which also is a good thing... do you have any idea how long this story will be? Not that it matters, I'm sure you will make the best of it, I'm just curious :P
Oh... and I also like the fact that you let everything take it's time. Details are important... and small little wordjokes (once again, I don't know if this is proper english) is also very funny, like you did with Lucius' thingy... tihi... I haven't heard any of those words before, did you come up with them yourself or is it just me who doesn't read enough?
Hermione is a bit naive (when it comes to sex) in your story, and I personally thinks it's a little weird... I mean, she reads a lot, doesn't she? And I don't think it's just the fact that she only have had bad boyfriends before who can do it... hasn't she spoken with her mother about it? Or her friends? Ah, well, I am sure you have a good explanation for it, and it's just a small thing, really... But I would be happy if Hermione gave some other reason to why she is like she is... or perhaps it is just the boys... but then she must have had quite bad self-esstem before... did she have that? Ah, well, I'm a little confused... or perhaps it's just the fact that I live among people who doesn't mind to talk about sex... at all.
But other then that, the story is fantastic!

Doohinky??? Dingle-Dangle??? ROFL.

I wonder how many names we can come up with for Lucius's manly bits.

I'd like to throw Mullwanger, One-Eyed Monster and Schlong out there.

Something tells me that Hermione won't be all that prim for long. She'll be going poo-poo in front of Lucius in no time. LOL.

Thanks for another great chapter.

I counted at least 12 different terms for his manhood. That is creative writing at its finest. My personal favorite image - living piston - That is truly inspired. Thanks for a wonderful set of new thoughts.