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I really enjoyed this chapter!! I also reread the last chapter and I enjoyed it much more the second time. I think I was just not in the mood for it at the time. I agree with your interpretation of the chapter. They really haven't had much of a chance to get to know each other very well. Keep the great work!

I have to admit, I'm of two minds about their situation. Lucius, as adorable as he is, is still the consummate manipulator. Hermione is all about the rules. I'm wondering if they will play off each other well, or if those traits will cause problems. I like that you are raising these questions. It means that you are doing your job well.

I still want to see the pictures. Are they like a Roccoco Kama Sutra, or more like wizarding Hustler. If the decor of the bedroom is any indicator, my vote is for Hustler. Could Larry Flint actually be a wizard? Hmm...

Whew!

All caught up! (Or at least I will be by the end of this review...)

Chapter 23 was smokin' hot! I think it was even hotter because we had to wait for it. Not that I would want to wait that long again...I'm quite eager to read all about the erotic-paintings escapades.

Apologies for the bad correction. I'm usually fairly careful but my eyes must have been playing tricks on me. Wow...I just went to reread the sentence. What was I thinking?! Your sentence is just fine. I must have somehow not seen the "something"...how embarassing.

ok...on to chapter 25

"Would you recognize evil if it came and gave you a lap dance?

Lucius is confused and horny. And honestly, I love that he was offended by Hermione's assessment of his past. The fact that his past was checkered is something he seems to have forgotten. Or he doesn't want his new wife to have that opinion of him. That is amusing. I wonder if Lucius is going to find something out about the Veil's intentions while he is at work.

sorry, no. things that are more compilcated seem to make more sense to me. though i never seem to figure out mysterys eariler though. :) well i am ready for more anytime. :)

They could be creating the paradox to save the wizarding world? Interesting (and a big responsibility). I look forward to more. Thanks for the update.

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Wow this story is Great!!!
I love reading it.. its really interesting! ..
cannot wait for more!!!

Awww! They

I have no idea how 2 !!! updates could have slipped by me... i was SO on the lookout for them, anyway:

Yes i am as confused as Lucius, but i do have several ideas what they might have to do. Well that is until i think about it, then i am clueless again.
I once again want to say Thank You, for such a wonderful story with such a great plot and the chemistry between them is amazing.
Love
Jocy