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Well. What a way to start a chapter! Goodness honey I nearly swallowed my own tongue from the shock. Which I quickly got over and hence quite enjoyed that first bit.....*shivers* mmmmmmm t'was much yumminess to be read And I like how Hermione is starting to realize her feeling for Lucius, and I think it's cute how miffed Lucius gets over her determination to remain detached. He needs to remember that just cause their married doesn't mean that he can't still 'court' her and try to woo her. Wow, so things are starting to make a little more sense, or at least come to light. I can't wait to see where this goes. And Lucius's turn to pick a painting eh? Oh I am definitely looking forward to that.

Holiday: Skegness. British coastline = crap weather and rust instead of a suntan! lol! Yeah... the other half will probably get me ten rolls of rubber wallpaper and a lobotomy if I say 'oh yes, and LaBib says hi to Bob.'

*blink* Well, that's certainly one way to open a chapter! Wow!

Oooh, he's all secretive - and I suddenly had a thought of Snape as the Master, and then I laughed at myself for it.

Lucius would find hiss bits and bobs in nooses and banned from the bed if he DARED stray from her! It wouldn't surprise me if she flipping castrated him with a rusty razor blade and left him to bleed to death! What IS he thinking?! Does he have a death wish??

Does Lucius do tongue exercises? Seriously, oral sex isn't something most can keep up for long! Has he got a thing for figs as a practice mechanism? (not to mention it is good for... erm... keeping things moving).

Can I answer Hermione's question of 'where do I go from here?': (1) kitchen for carbs (2) back to bed and burn them off. Simple.

These two aren't on the same flipping song sheet! Or, more accurately they are, but they're singing in two different choirs! Can you, the esteemed author, just bang their heads together for us?

Prophesy! Ooooh! Has Hermione got one too? Bit vague, but I have to agree that the Divination people were a bit floaty with their explanations.

marshmallow? We can just review, right? We don't have to perform some strange ritual of drowning you in hot chocolate; or dance around where you're being burnt at the stake and prod you with sticks.

And how many cups of tea have I consumed today? The above is weird, even for me!

Oh my, Lucius' turn to pick a painting. Can't wait to see which "scene" he would like to reenact. And that Master ... looking more like a disenfranchised wizard, perhaps a maltreated squib or someone who felt they didn't get their just desserts after the War? Was thinking Snape ... but, his lack of presence in the future would alter too much or maybe not. Hmmmm, just love a tasty mystery. Thanks for sharing! PW

I COULDN'T HELP IT! IT WAS IRRESISTIBLE!

*giggles

OHHHH!!! I liked that one!! Things are getting interesting, in and out of bed!! :)

Being a marshmellow is a perfectly acceptable thing to be. I certainly hope Lucius figures out Hermionie's avoiding him emotionally because she's scared and he does something about it. Keep it up, love this story and your writing!
~Dolphin dreamer

Ohhhhh they have to find a way to stop the Master somehow is my guess, but how?!
And when is Hermione *finally* growing up and realizing that its fun to shag Lucius and it would be even more fun to love him i bet. *sighs* ;)
Anyways, another great chapter that keeps me on my toes.

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Jocy

Wow! Ok I've finally caught up to all your stories so far. I spent all night reading everything you've written and I must say I'm glad I did! You are a very talented writer and I enjoy your stories immensely. Hope you update soon!

This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

omg. great chapter. i CANNOT wait to see what painting Lucius picks.