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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely as always though I must say I
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always. I'm glad they've made some progress. I can't wait for more!!
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter cleared out a lot emotions! I'm Hermione told Lucius why she is so... innocent... and... well... why she holds back. That Margarate-girl was funny :P Poor woman, don't even have two braincells that can play :P Oh, I hope there will be some spanking in the next chapter! But I wonder if Lucius knows who the master is... hmhm.. it will be interesting to find out. If Lucius hadn't said that Abraxas had died, I would think the Master was him. Then you could do this Star Wars-thingy out of it! Hehe, or maybe not :P
Ah, lovely chapter! Now I'm sleepy (it's almost midnight in this part of the world)
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schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Genuis. 'Nuff said.
person Citten
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe. he got her there! :) well as always the chapter was worth the weeks wait. love the prophcey- i have a guess at what it may mean but i am going to wait and see what you do to see if i am right. unless you want me to say what i am thinking? but where is the fun in that! :) i look forward to what painting lucius is going to pick. stupid hermione earlier though with what she was thinking about lucius unless you truely-- and i mean truely know a person you should always ask the person NOT assume! well they will eventually learn! :) until next time!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I tried to send a review earlier but my computer spazzed out and I don't think it sent it so let me try again. This is an absolutely amazing story. I stayed up until 5 am when I had to get up at 7. I could not drag myself away. I kept promising myself 5 more minutes and well, we know how that goes. Please keep up the amazing job. I can't wait to read what happens next....and which painting Lucius chooses. Can you please add me to an update email...falling_magic@yahoo.com. Thanks!! :)
person Rini
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The slobby clothing is pass
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, oh my, oh my! The beginning of this chapter is steaming hot. And you were so amazingly descriptive too. I think I was squirming in my chair as I was reading this. I almost think Lucius would have to tie me down for that kind of treatment.
person doodle
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Art is essential to a well rounded education. I can not begin to guess where you will lead. However I am ready to follow.
person Muffy
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes they are too smart for their own good. Again, I look forward to your next update. Thanks!