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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How can Lucius think his behaviour is justified? He claims that he only spanks his employees but he draws the line at anything sexual and then he tells Hermione that spanking is one part of the sexual relationship he'd like to explore with her. The man is a dog! Aint he great :D

You can put away the noose. I enjoyed Lucius and his reasoning in this chapter very much.
person Citten
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so just add some gram-crackers and some chocolate, lots of chocolate in the next chapter and we will be one roasting smore and forgiven. but you better be making it good! :) so two out there questions the malfoy family is schooled in french--personally i love it! :) second does hermione speek french? (okay image the eyebrows wiggling) so on with the show! right? :)
person Damiana
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27

Is something missing in this sentence?---"It was a popular idea and the women had been very pleased it and with their new master."

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person Muffy
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by the LOAN plot. I look forward to more :) Very interesting chapter. Thanks!
person mlui
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 27 - I can understand how Hermione is appalled. I would be appalled somewhat, but not to her extent. If he'd just talked to her before about how he was feeling...but then again, Hermione might not be so receptive then. Great chapter, please update again soon!
person Jesse
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always you have written a great chapter!! I love how you are adding a very intriguing plot.. and everything seems well thought out.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CH 27 -

Wow, so Lucius has been patting the derri
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw LaBib, it
person onduril
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I am one of your lurkers and I must admit that I don't usually review stories except they are just briliiant and keep me alive during long hours (like now in my seminar at the university).

However I just adore your story and I like the way you write Hermione and Lucius. Most often I know how the story will end after the first few chapters. Only some have surprised me thus far and yours in one of it. In 8 years of reading ff I found about 20 stories that really caught me. (I hope that someone thinks the same about my stories, but they ain't that good).
Back to the topic at hand. I just adoe you and your story and the first thing I do after booting up my PC is looking if you updated your story.
Basically this post could be cut down to OMG!! I love you!! I love this story!! I hope you will finish it fast and everybody will be happy!!!
Love from an avid german reader...^^
*bighug*
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that. They truly needed to talk. God, I'd be ready to kill myself if boring perfunctory sex was all I got. And it would make me feel like some receptacle instead of a partner, so I totally understand Lucius. Hermione is in for a big surprise, I'm sure, when she realizes how much she can enjoy some non-vanilla sex.