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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person jw
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 29 - aha, the red-circled names and number of LOAN entries match - so was Uncle Malfoy secretly a source of help to displaced Squibs? I cannot guess that LOAN stands for and will add that to the long list of mysteries to be revealed. :=) I'm so glad the newlyweds are getting along, enough to have a 'painting' in the next chapter. squeee!! thank you for updating, and glad you had a good visit on the 4th.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! This was another lovely chapter LaBib!

So Hermione is bored to death hanging out with all those snobby purebloods. Can
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You evil cliffie master! Need more lemons, please. A little missionary is fine but (insert yawn here) variety is the spice of life. I bet Hermione turns into a real little nympho by the time Lucius is done with her sex education.

Does Lucius know more about their predicament than he's letting on? It seems he never tells Hermione the full story until she confronts him. Sneaky Slytherin!
person Muffy
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I'm stoked to read what comes next in the mystery plot. I won't make guesses, I'd rather watch it all play out. Thanks for the update!
person Citten
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
let the fun begin! i will be waiting! :) glad to hear you had a great four of july holiday with family! family is always wonderful times and memories! hope to read more soon! :)
person Citten
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
let the fun begin!!! i will be waiting for the next chapter happily! :) glad to hear you had a great Fourth of July holiday with family! they always have the best memories and can have the best time! hope to have more soon! ;)
person amyfeddy
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what painting he picks out. I loved everything they confessed to each other. It's about time, especially for Hermione. She usually so outgoing with her thoughts, but all of the shit going through her head and not coming out of her mouth was getting old. I love this story, I check this site many times a day just to see if you have updated, it frequently makes me laugh out loud, especially Lucius. The way you write his dry wit is just great. I will patiently wiat for more, apparently I got a little too close to veil as well, because wow that is the most I ever written about any story ever. What can I say that is the effect your writing has on me. Am I next in the spanking line? I'll be good (or bad) which ever Lucuis prefers.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
People only like missionary sex? Hee. OK, well, that gives some clues there, and the Squibs are starting to be ostracized, but how are they going to turn that around? I'm sure you will give us a wonderful explanation. Boy, if I had to do all that stuff Hermione is doing with stuffy rich housewives, I'd probably start murdering them, or become a cat burglar and steal their jewelry.
person Utopia
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! In the opening, Hermione could easily be Lizzy with her hate of the tete-et-tetes with the socailites! I've read so much P&P fanfics with Lizzy complaining about the many Carolines! lol! You're feeding my muse lady!

What's to stop her transfiguring the bloomers into Frenchies? I'm a sod for knickers (as well as socks) and I just bought a pair that wouldn't look out of place on a Moulin Rouge cancan dancer! You know, with all the frills and bows! Can't she transfigure a pair (or six) of them? They're a bit more naughty; Lucius might stop laughing!

I was rather bored one day, and avoiding coursework... and I worked out the genetics of Harry Potter! I thought it was a combination of two sets of genes that made it up. One set of genes gives the ability to use magic, and is dominant (so MM or Mm would be magical); but there has to be something that means muggleborns and squibs can exist - so there has to be a recessive gene for the ability to use or access the magic (so aa would let you be completely magical if you were MM or Mm!) A squib would be dominanat for both - having magical ability but not the ability to use it... and the muggle borns could turn up if the genes all matched up! (did that make sense?)

Oooh, black lace. mmmmm. Awww! no corsets! I do like my corsets! (Though, they'd be referred to as a pair of stays in that time, accodring to P&P DVD. I love that DVD! mmmm, McFadden as Darcy... *dribble*)

Lucius makes her sound like a pedigree from the Kennel Club! KC pedigrees are BRILLIANT to read, my former boss was a prize winner at Crufts (best in breed and best junior, but no best in shows - yet). He's being rather insulting - but at least he was honest and told her!

Ooooh, painting.

Stuffing in a lemon? Has this fic just turned into a Sunday roast chicken?? Is there some sage and onion in there too?
person onduril
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, we'll leave Lucius as the heir and go on with the other mistery.
I got some theories about the uncle and the pair from thirty years ago, but I am not sure whether they are right as I am not writing the story.
But nonetheless, a great chapter and I am looking forward to the next one and see how Hermione takes it to be spanked.

Have a nice week and don't forget us here.

A faithful Delurker...^^