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Oh yes

YEAH she did it!!! well that went well. but i liked the french part. :) what is next for our lovers? i cant wait to see what you have in store for us next! do post soon my dear. :)

I loved Lucius' easy acceptance of Hermione's scare. Kind of romantic. Thank you for the update.

I don't really have a favourite mystery writer. I mostly just appreciate plot driven intelligent fan fiction :) Thank you.

Well, where should I start

BRAVO!!! What an amazing lemon!!! Standing ovation for you today!!! Great job on that!!!

ch 30 - Hermione's "All the paintings I turned down before are back in play" - OMG! wild woman!! and very bold, to undress Lucius like that and initiate the spanking. I love the way you bring them closer together in small steps, such as her showing him the scar - and then having him show his complete acceptance of it. but for him to fall asleep in the bathtub?? LUCIUS!! oh well, perhaps he needed to rest up for the "painting." (heh!) thanks for the fun chapter, and for letting their marriage start to come together.

I'm not sure why he's the most interesting man in the world, but my husband likes those commercials. OK, very hot. I loved that scene. And yes, a spanked ass certainly adds some intensity to sex. Yum. I vote for lemons in every chapter. And leave it to Hermione to keep a scar like that. And I really was pleased that Lucius didn't think it was an issue, it certainly helped.

Oh Lucius, so eager to introduce his wife to the joys of kinky sex. I couldn

I have not even read the first word of this story, but just your introduction gets five stars from me. Thank you for caring about your readers and posting a story that will be completed. I am sure I will love the story because if you emphathize that much with your readers to post that intro, you will care enough to write a wonderful story.

Thanks,

Morgana

I was rather tempted to giving my lecturer my take on HP genetics... and talked myself out of it.

Oooh, can I add one to the lemon, going Monty Python? A twist of lemming!

Awwww! Yeah, why hasn't she had it removed? Or is this Dolohov's work? Ah, maybe not.

He he! Big bad death eater is ticklish! lol!

I think Hermione's getting into it now... boobs on show but really bothered that he's getting a little glimpse of 'down there'. She'll be keeping her ankles covered next!

What's up with darling? I get called darling!

That's a very big jump for Hermione! Lucius is like a child in a sweet shop with it - and I think he's forgotten that she's new to all this and hasn't done it before. She's trying to be more fair to him, even though she's scared. He'd better realise what she's doing for him!

Oi! Madam! Your muse is talking to mine! lol I've got something rather similar written ready for another LM/HG fic, but its Snape doing the spanking of the French maid.

Is Hermione channeling 'phlegm' (ie. Fleur). lol. Though, her French probably isn't that bad, I think in the books it said she frequently went skiing in the French alps with her parents.

He he! This is fun! She's no submissive! Lucius has his work cut out for him with her! She's not going to roll over and play dead for him! he he! Gotta love her backbiting and bitching! Spanking doesn't work for us, we're always slapping each other's bottoms (not too hard) at home! Takes all the fun out of it.

Erm... how does Lucius know about French maids? Does France not have house elves? Surely a human maid is a completely foreign concept to the wizarding world?

Awww... poor Lucius was beaten in business by his ladies. Lol! I can see a picket line with them holding signs saying 'spankings for all' and 'equality in work'. He he! I don't think the woman who let it slip to Hermione could have lied if she tried!

Why did I expect her, on him asking if she accepted him as master, to say 'no'?

I think EVERY straight bloke has a stocking fetish. They get one glimse of the shadow of a garter belt and suspenders through your frock and they go rabid! Lucius is no exception.

Awww... and a happily ever after for the chapter.