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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is too cute. He was as excited as a kid at Christmas. I loved this update, somehow though I missed the last one as well. Both were wonderful and I can't wait for more!!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius tied up! Ah, the sight is unforgetable in my mind. Keep up the good work!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This isn't an actual review, and I don't know of any other method of contacting you as I have absolutely no idea how live journal works!
Basically, Snape_Goddess and I (in a Trans-Atlantic colaboration), are writing a joint LM/HG story; during which we have a French maid fantasy scene, complete with spanking. This scene is between Snape and an OFC - but it still looks like plagiarism to us after reading chapter 30 of Beyond the Veil.
We'd like your opinion on this, and (in essence) a thumbs up or thumbs down from you on the chapter going ahead.
Drop me an email about it, if you wouldn't mind! utopia_beta@hotmail.co.uk
Oh, and feel free to delete this 'review' as it isn't one. Thanks for reading this.
Basically, Snape_Goddess and I (in a Trans-Atlantic colaboration), are writing a joint LM/HG story; during which we have a French maid fantasy scene, complete with spanking. This scene is between Snape and an OFC - but it still looks like plagiarism to us after reading chapter 30 of Beyond the Veil.
We'd like your opinion on this, and (in essence) a thumbs up or thumbs down from you on the chapter going ahead.
Drop me an email about it, if you wouldn't mind! utopia_beta@hotmail.co.uk
Oh, and feel free to delete this 'review' as it isn't one. Thanks for reading this.
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do I find the idea of Lucius standing in a bedchamber explaining "Doggy Style" to Hermione so funny? I mean I know shes innocent to a degree but for some reason the discussion seems hilarious to me. Though I will admit I have a fondness for unusual conversations, the more odd they are the more I enjoy them....just had a conversation involving the term "pork sword" with a friend....
"You nasty man" I like that, LOL.
So she let him spank her! About time the tight arsed little witch loosened up! question is how well will Hermione take to it when Lucius wishes to be the one on the recieving end of the swats? Will she take to it as well as she did when she was the recipient? It was sweet of him to offer her the ointment before "saddling" up....ah, love in bloom.....
"You nasty man" I like that, LOL.
So she let him spank her! About time the tight arsed little witch loosened up! question is how well will Hermione take to it when Lucius wishes to be the one on the recieving end of the swats? Will she take to it as well as she did when she was the recipient? It was sweet of him to offer her the ointment before "saddling" up....ah, love in bloom.....
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot so far. I think your idea of pre-writing the story before posting it is great!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw LaBib, I
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am truly enjoying the story thus far. Keep up the good work!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was beyond hot, LaBib! Holy Severus! I love the way Lucius accepted Hermione for what she was, scars and all. God, Lord Voldemort really was a bastard wasn
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say other than that I am truly enjoying this story. Keep up the good work!
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy moly! I will probably waffle on now but nothing I say could do that justice! That was some mighty fine lemons! I mean, from beginning to end just really fantastic.
Poor Hermione with her scar. It must have been hard to show Lucius, especially with Roger being an ass, but she obviously knows she can put her trust in Lucius and then when he kissed his way along her scar... don't you just love him.
It's lucky for Hermione that her husband is a loving, handsome, intelligent, elegant, naughty, utterly lickable... sorry what was I saying?
I love when you write about them in the bath together I just think it's so intimate, especially with Hermione drying Lucius off.
God, Hermione's accent wasn't the greatest but that really didn't matter once she was spread over Lucius' lap.
Another good chapter so roll on next one! A lovely lemony interlude in your brilliant story.
Poor Hermione with her scar. It must have been hard to show Lucius, especially with Roger being an ass, but she obviously knows she can put her trust in Lucius and then when he kissed his way along her scar... don't you just love him.
It's lucky for Hermione that her husband is a loving, handsome, intelligent, elegant, naughty, utterly lickable... sorry what was I saying?
I love when you write about them in the bath together I just think it's so intimate, especially with Hermione drying Lucius off.
God, Hermione's accent wasn't the greatest but that really didn't matter once she was spread over Lucius' lap.
Another good chapter so roll on next one! A lovely lemony interlude in your brilliant story.