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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The only gory Anita Blake is Obsidian Butterfly - and I couldn't get past chapter 4! I've given up on LKH, its just pure porn now - no plot what so ever (unless it's a recycled one from a past book). Book five is the one you want - she sleeps with JC and it's just a perfect smut scene!
Awww... no ickle people yet. *panic* Did I just request a baby in a fic? Have I lost it? I hate kids!
Is she drunk? *blink* I was Glenda in tWoO when I was eleven, I wore a horror of a frock that my Mum had once worn to be a bridesmaid in! I know brides often dress their maids in awful dresses to make themselves look good - but that monstrosity took the biscuit! lol!
I had to look up infinitesimally, good word. That paragraph had lots of good words. I just got a DS - and I'm going to get word coach to go with my Brain Training! I might be able to keep up with you then! lol!
I wouldn't want to be in Lucius's shoes when he goes over what's happening now. It's taken long enough to get Hermione to be an active partner in bed - and this was rather unexpected. I know she's not complaining, and is obviously aroused - but this feels so forced to me; he's a dominating presence, but he's using his upperhand of sexual knowledge to punish when he doesn't realise what he's punishing... it might be a rather large set back in their relationship - his using their intimacy as a reprimand won't go down well at all! And if he knew what was good for him he'd get down on his knees and beg she doesn't castrate him for it!!!!
Right... back to a happier note... I do like how you just innocently remind the reader where they've come from! The reader is just like the people of whatever-the-era is (can't remember) - we feel as if they're part of it and have forgotten they're from C21! You're a bit like Tolkien with that one - he very rarely tells you the Hobbits are short - but slips in little, subtle reminders that just keep you recognising that they're 3' tall.
You know, the OED had this thing of looking for when words and phrases were first written down and documented... when the heck did Fuck enter the English language? And was its original meaning the one it still has today?? *just curious* I know that Hussy is a very old word - turns up quite frequently in the P&P fics! But I wonder if Hermione asking to be fucked is a word the veil has planted in her mind, or something a more accepting sexual nature has introduced?
OMG! I wrote the F word twice in a review! I'm sorry! Won't do it again!
11/10
Awww... no ickle people yet. *panic* Did I just request a baby in a fic? Have I lost it? I hate kids!
Is she drunk? *blink* I was Glenda in tWoO when I was eleven, I wore a horror of a frock that my Mum had once worn to be a bridesmaid in! I know brides often dress their maids in awful dresses to make themselves look good - but that monstrosity took the biscuit! lol!
I had to look up infinitesimally, good word. That paragraph had lots of good words. I just got a DS - and I'm going to get word coach to go with my Brain Training! I might be able to keep up with you then! lol!
I wouldn't want to be in Lucius's shoes when he goes over what's happening now. It's taken long enough to get Hermione to be an active partner in bed - and this was rather unexpected. I know she's not complaining, and is obviously aroused - but this feels so forced to me; he's a dominating presence, but he's using his upperhand of sexual knowledge to punish when he doesn't realise what he's punishing... it might be a rather large set back in their relationship - his using their intimacy as a reprimand won't go down well at all! And if he knew what was good for him he'd get down on his knees and beg she doesn't castrate him for it!!!!
Right... back to a happier note... I do like how you just innocently remind the reader where they've come from! The reader is just like the people of whatever-the-era is (can't remember) - we feel as if they're part of it and have forgotten they're from C21! You're a bit like Tolkien with that one - he very rarely tells you the Hobbits are short - but slips in little, subtle reminders that just keep you recognising that they're 3' tall.
You know, the OED had this thing of looking for when words and phrases were first written down and documented... when the heck did Fuck enter the English language? And was its original meaning the one it still has today?? *just curious* I know that Hussy is a very old word - turns up quite frequently in the P&P fics! But I wonder if Hermione asking to be fucked is a word the veil has planted in her mind, or something a more accepting sexual nature has introduced?
OMG! I wrote the F word twice in a review! I'm sorry! Won't do it again!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will have you know that I have to buy yet another new chair. One that accomadates the welts from Lucius and the lemons you were gracious enough to give. The wizard of Auds, that was cute. And I am loving Hermione "I wanna be fucked" that was great, and her accidentaly taunting him prancing about in the nude. Write on, can't wait for more.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness that was intense. Another song comes to mind. What a man... :)
Wizard of Oz. Hee! Channelling Judy. Brilliant. Just brilliant. Thanks for the update.
Wizard of Oz. Hee! Channelling Judy. Brilliant. Just brilliant. Thanks for the update.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The ball was spot on. I think a weakness for red shoes is universal. The description of Hermione's work attire was great. Practical to a fault.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snorting, guffawing, trying desperately to catch my breath ... Wizard of Auds ... poor Lucius. Lucky Hermione, lucky readers! Wooo Hooo!
Ding dong the witch is dead (asleep) after that lemon aid!
Ding dong the witch is dead (asleep) after that lemon aid!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chortle* Poor Lucius! I hope Hermione does tell him that 'Wizard of Oz' is a song from a Muggle movie; for all the fronts he puts on, he is insecure! However, this was a most delectable consequence to a miscommunication. I wish all my miscommunications ended like that. *wistful sigh*
Something tells me it won't be the last miscommunication they have, though...and I'm wondering, if there is a falling out, where can Hermione go? This isn't a world that's all that safe or amenable to single women.
And if/when they return to their own time, Hermione simply MUST make Lucius watch The Wizard of Oz. I can just imagine his reaction.
Great work as always!
Something tells me it won't be the last miscommunication they have, though...and I'm wondering, if there is a falling out, where can Hermione go? This isn't a world that's all that safe or amenable to single women.
And if/when they return to their own time, Hermione simply MUST make Lucius watch The Wizard of Oz. I can just imagine his reaction.
Great work as always!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32
Well...those were some lemons!
You had me laughing out loud with the Wizard of Oz misunderstandings...Ah Lucius is so cute when he's jealous.
Well...those were some lemons!
You had me laughing out loud with the Wizard of Oz misunderstandings...Ah Lucius is so cute when he's jealous.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! SEE, U DID THAT SHIT AGAIN..... U GOT ME ALL HOT AND BOTHERED THEN IT ENDED.....DAMN U!!!! DO U KNOW U HAD ME CHECKING EVERY FEW HOURS TO SEE IF U UPDATED..... I SHOULDA JUST WAITED A MONTH A HAD A FEW UPDATES TO READ RATHER THEN BE AROUSED BY THIS TEASE(OMFG!!! I'D SOOOO DO LUCIUS!!!!) U KNOW WHAT.... I'VE OFFICALLY DECIDED THAT THIS IS SOME FUCKSHIT... I'M GOING TO TAKE SHOWER AND RINSE THE EVIDANCE OFF! BYE.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't yell for lemons, but I'll gladly review this chapter. I loved it! And I hope he will not take it too hard, the thing with "The Wizard of Oz". I loved it. Hermione did the right thing to tell him how she loved it... That should count something. The mental image with Hermione with white socks and red shoes, Mmmhh
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Was she slightly tipsy when she got home? Dancing naked in ruby slippers is hilarious! And jealous Lucius is an even sexier Lucius, if that is actually humanly possible. Then again, he's a wizard, so humanity would be in question their wouldnt it?
Oh well, lovely lemons, dearling!
Happy Writing!
SG
Oh well, lovely lemons, dearling!
Happy Writing!
SG