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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Anon
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
still love it!!!1
person smmz79
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha i love it lucius is soo funny with his sarcasm.... great chap the cow licking him was hysterical.. i am definitely looking forward to the rest
person smmz79
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice first two chaps i like that lucius was unsure as to who she was... so the veil spit them out some where that they are unsure of.... i like that lucius is still lucius but he is also very gentlemanly it makes me all warm....
person Missy85
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a ride. Thanks La Bib, this is an awesome story and I loved re-reading. I think I actually enjoyed it more this time because I could read it from start to finish, and I have to say congrats on a really well thought out and executed storyline. Im looking forward to your next story :)
person Cyrielle
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That... was... AMAZING!!! You, my dear, have convinced me that the Lucius/Hermione pairing is as good as the Severus/Hermione one! Maybe it is better... I haven't decided yet. I'll put them even for now.
I am SO going to check your other stories! ;)
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just found and read Beyond the Veil. I like completed stories as too many just stop and the story stays there open and unended which pisses me off!
This was an interesting story and well written.
I've always been especially susceptible to my men when they have water running off them so especially enjoyed the bath scene
What got me to this story was your statement somewhere that you always finish your stories. I was so happy to read that!
I think stories years old and uncompleted should be deleted. If the author isn't going to finish then why leave them out there?
Thanks for writing.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I started reading it a while ago, but got so busy that I wasn't able to finish. Well, I sat down this morning and read the rest. I loved it! Great job!
person TashRose
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Awesome story. I spent ALL day reading all 50 chapters of this in one settting. Whew. I was so glad to see it completely posted, and I was eager to read it. It was well worth every minute, hour, and the entire day. ROFL!! Original plot, great characterizations, lovely humor, definitely hot and erotic, and I loved the intrigue.

P.S. if you want to contact me at all you can go to www.grangerenchanted.com/enchant/ and look for author TashaRose. I don't like my email openly posted, and since I'm not registered with AFF here, I'm not sure how it will post my address if I put it in the email section.
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastically generous Lucius/Hermoine story. There are not enough of them out there. I greatly enjoyed the plot/porn mix. I'm so glad you found a way to make it work for them. Cheers!
person lilashannah
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't going to read this story at first..But last night at 10:30 I decided what the hey.I had to call in to work today as I was up untill 5:30am reading your story.Holy,you got me hooked by the end of the first chappy.
I was sorry to see it end.I can't wait to see what you come up with next