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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person CoCoM
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I think if I were in Lucius's place I would take advantage of every situation I could as well! Glad he found Hermione before anything too terribly bad happened.
person CoCoM
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! You have to love opportunistic Lucius! Glad he came to Hermione's aid but disappointed he had to ruin his immediate chances with her due to his less than pleasant dealings wih a nasty trollop. Bad Lucius!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those ruby slippers never got Dorothy in this kind of trouble! Loved the 'Wizard of Auds' and Hermione's whole misjudgement of the situation. Poor confused Malfoy - I suppose in her way Hermione did run into some lions and tigers and bears (oh my!).

His reaction was breathtakingly hot - that bit where he's laying down the law while also, erm, laying down is a scorcher! I had to re-read that bit several times before I could move on!

Veeery nice.
person CoCoM
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting beginning. Original plot, for sure. I am anxious to se if anyone else has survived.
person CoCoM
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! "I don't think I could find your bosoms with a road map." I was giggling so much reading that bit. Looking forward to more bickering and UST to come!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me start off by saying that I've only recently started reading your story. I've read up to chapter 15 thus far and I am completely hooked! I read your submissions for SG's Love Song challenge, so I knew that I wouldn't be disappointed with you longer story.

I am mesmerized. This world you have spun...back in time without the use of a timeturner...is very original. I like it!

Great fic so far!

Looking forward to more,
MHS
person CoCoM
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so clever! I am guessing they have arrived around about the time of the Napoleonic wars? I am totally bugged that I have to go to work and can't keep reading all day! *sulk*
person Rini
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi LaBib

Yeah, I found out they were actually meant to be silver after I first saw the movie. Apparently the silver colour was too hard to put on film back then.

Those ensembles were rather ghastly *giggle*

Lol! Of course Lucius would take Hermione singing about the Wizard of Oz the wrong way :)

What
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, Wizard of Oz? Lucius is jealous of HIM? My god LaBib, I enjoyed this chapter!

The red shoes tickled me, I have a pair of Dorothy's myself, and never thought about the potent power of them before LOL

Looking forward to the next chapter!