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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person CoCoM
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, as long as it will be SOON I suppose we can forgive you.....*sigh*
Loved Hermione's retort to Lucius's slightly condescending remark about her having wine. Sassy Hermione is my favourite!
person CoCoM
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What I wouldn't give to be in a bathtub with an aroused, naked and very wet Lucius Malfoy! *fans self* Love the image of his gorgeous hair being washed....again, what I wouldn't give....
person CoCoM
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! No dry knickers indeed! I must admit while this was very steamy and fairly sweeet, I am hoping to see some of Lucius's kinkiness rear it's head.
person CoCoM
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Hermione freaking out because it is daytime and they can't possibly have sex because it isn't dark was too much. And Lucius saying how much she needs him....hello! That has been glaringly obvious since the beginning. I am hoping that she follows through with her promise though.
BTW, the link for the picture was 100% drool-worthy. I believe I felt a bit faint actually after my initial ragged intake of breath, followed by lack of oxygen as I couldn't get my brain to kick into gear...Absolutely gorgeous!
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woha... I wait vor the update! Really. I love your Lucius/Hermione fics. They rock! But I am wondering how the threats against the Squibs can continue when the uncle is dead? Unless he wasn't he only one behind it...

May be the money that was transfered from his accounts was used to decourage possible future spouses for the Squibs? Anyways, I don't think that standing orders exist in the wizarding world? Plus, Lucius and Hermione would have relised that there were transfers from their account?

Questions over Questions... *think hard* Update Pleeeease!

Sabine
person CoCoM
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this turn of events! How did anyone know that they were arriving? I am so curious to find out. Either way it is good that they will not have to scrounge around for things anymore. I am also eagerly awaiting their step in the next direction of their physical relationship. The UST is starting to get to me! LOL
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was some lovley smut! But I'm too tried to enjoy it so I'll just re-read it another time :P I wonder when Lucius will have the courage to tell Hermione that he loves her... hm... have Hermione told him already? I can't seem to remember... I don't think she has... ah, well. It's just so obviuse that they love each other! It's so cute :) And the way Lucius misunderstood the song Hermione was singing was just funny :P Hehe...
great chapter!
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, my, my, another lovely addition as always. Lucius is quite passionate but I
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm going to have to stop reading your stories at work. That was certainly a chapter I didn't want to share with my coworkers. Hot is not the word for Lucius pounding into Hermione in all ways. Now, that I'm safely home, are re-read the chapter, It's even hotter. It was sweet (Don't tell Lucius I said that about him) that Lucius was so jealous of the 'Wizard of Auds.' Poor Lucius, thinking he had competition, and lucky Hermione. Maybe she shouldn't explain to him until the morning, after a little resinging of the song. Great job.
person Tenar10r
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lemons so lemony we won't un-pucker for days!