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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I really can't believe you left us like that! I hope you know how evil you are. But anyways.. the plot is getting interesting and I want to know more.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is apologising! And he feels embarrassed for not knowing a muggle book
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course you need a cooling off period - don't get me wrong, I love Lucius but Hermione does need to be able to walk and having a small break from the lemons make them that much sweeter next time round. although, lemons aren't really sweet are they? You know what I mean!
Another ace chapter. No wonder Lucius had a skip in his step although I loved that he got worried about having hurt Hermione. That possessive nature coupled with a tender loving side just makes for an even better Lucius.
More intrigue with the squibs. The storyline is just so good, it just amazes me how you come up with all this. With those two working on it, whoever the blackmailer is better run and hide cos Hermione and Lucius are gonna get you!
I did realise cookies and cake weren't really gonna cut it. I can imagine the guards aren't the most eloquent of creatures but they aren't copulating anywhere near me. I know what has to be done though. I'm just going to have to take the job in hand... wearing protective gloves and chanting 'naked lucius' in my head the whole time, followed by several showers. I could stretch to a sponge bath but that's gonna require a hazmat suit. But, it's a sacrifice I'm willing to make. I can handle the skinny ones, it's the hairy, sweaty ones that make me cringe! naked lucius, naked lucius, naked lucius, naked lucius...
Another ace chapter. No wonder Lucius had a skip in his step although I loved that he got worried about having hurt Hermione. That possessive nature coupled with a tender loving side just makes for an even better Lucius.
More intrigue with the squibs. The storyline is just so good, it just amazes me how you come up with all this. With those two working on it, whoever the blackmailer is better run and hide cos Hermione and Lucius are gonna get you!
I did realise cookies and cake weren't really gonna cut it. I can imagine the guards aren't the most eloquent of creatures but they aren't copulating anywhere near me. I know what has to be done though. I'm just going to have to take the job in hand... wearing protective gloves and chanting 'naked lucius' in my head the whole time, followed by several showers. I could stretch to a sponge bath but that's gonna require a hazmat suit. But, it's a sacrifice I'm willing to make. I can handle the skinny ones, it's the hairy, sweaty ones that make me cringe! naked lucius, naked lucius, naked lucius, naked lucius...
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Divine story! I am one of the dreaded lurkers that molest your hit counter and evaporate, and I have finally deigned to leave a review. Okay, here it goes: what an intelligent and may I say tastefully lemony story. I have some ideas of where you're going with this,but no true clue. The plot is magnificent, and I am even more pleased that there is, in fact much of it to be found in between the (delicious) lemons
and UST. Your Hermione and Lucius are such a realistic and relatable couple, it makes the story so much more profound. I am especially impressed that you make your noticeably different from your other fics. So I must say it is a rare and delightful surprise to find a writer such as yourself hiding behind the terrible smut that clogs AFF. I can't WAIT for thenext update, and I am going to thumb through your other fics to sustain me.
L'amour
The Green Fairy
P.S. I LOVE dominant Lucius, he makes me shiver.
and UST. Your Hermione and Lucius are such a realistic and relatable couple, it makes the story so much more profound. I am especially impressed that you make your noticeably different from your other fics. So I must say it is a rare and delightful surprise to find a writer such as yourself hiding behind the terrible smut that clogs AFF. I can't WAIT for thenext update, and I am going to thumb through your other fics to sustain me.
L'amour
The Green Fairy
P.S. I LOVE dominant Lucius, he makes me shiver.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius's misunderstanding about the "Wizard of Auds" is so amusing! Did you think of that before you started writing this story or did it come to you as you were going along. Either way, I am impressed. :-)
Now...WHO is doing the blackmailing???
I cannot wait for your next update and hopefully some more exploration of the naughty paintings! Whoo hoo! *giggle*
Now...WHO is doing the blackmailing???
I cannot wait for your next update and hopefully some more exploration of the naughty paintings! Whoo hoo! *giggle*
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so this whole thing with the Squibs goes deeper...I'm very intreiged...The whole blackmail plot is very original as is the plot, you have a vivid imagination, LaBib.
Poor old Luci, the wizard of Oz, god it still makes me laugh.
Yep, my red shoes do have a habit of sometimes getting me what I wish for. They have 6 inch heels and I love them LOL call em my dazzling heels. Oh to wish though...*sighs* I know what or rather WHO I'd wish for =)
A great chapter! I look forward to the next one!
Poor old Luci, the wizard of Oz, god it still makes me laugh.
Yep, my red shoes do have a habit of sometimes getting me what I wish for. They have 6 inch heels and I love them LOL call em my dazzling heels. Oh to wish though...*sighs* I know what or rather WHO I'd wish for =)
A great chapter! I look forward to the next one!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good lord those pictures of Lucius nearly gave me heart failure. lol Great update, and as always I can't wait for more!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I love sexy, jealous, forceful-while-still-loving-in-spite-of-himself Lucius! VERY nice.
It was interesting to hear the story about his uncle in the previous chapter. I am still looking forward to finding out if Lucius has taken his anscestors place or if he is in fact his own anscestor....it is all a bit confusing. Sort of like a bizarre episode of wizard "Doctor Who."
I was giggling over the description of puce. Anyone who is an avid reader of Regency novels I am sure can relate.
It was interesting to hear the story about his uncle in the previous chapter. I am still looking forward to finding out if Lucius has taken his anscestors place or if he is in fact his own anscestor....it is all a bit confusing. Sort of like a bizarre episode of wizard "Doctor Who."
I was giggling over the description of puce. Anyone who is an avid reader of Regency novels I am sure can relate.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm not at work. So I could look at that picture. Yum. The Wizard of Auds is still cracking me up. Will Hermione let him in on the joke, or will she let him suffer more?
I see Hermione handled that well and delicately for Lucius' bruised sensiblilities. And Lucius is bending in his regard for Hermione, I see. I wonder who will say 'I love you' first. I think it will be him. He's such a romantic.
Yes, the similarities between Lucius and Hermione are striking, aren't they? I'm glad they are getting to know each other well enough now to realize they aren't so different.
Oh, my. Now I'm wondering if one of the Dursley's is the Master guy. It could be Dudley being controlled by a squib. I think I read somewhere that Muggleborns in the HP world came from an ancestor being a squib. Maybe Petuniais really pissed about Lily and siezed and opportunity. I also think you've introduced the character that is blackmailing, I just can't guess who yet.
Great job, and I will tell when I get a new chapter done on my story.
I see Hermione handled that well and delicately for Lucius' bruised sensiblilities. And Lucius is bending in his regard for Hermione, I see. I wonder who will say 'I love you' first. I think it will be him. He's such a romantic.
Yes, the similarities between Lucius and Hermione are striking, aren't they? I'm glad they are getting to know each other well enough now to realize they aren't so different.
Oh, my. Now I'm wondering if one of the Dursley's is the Master guy. It could be Dudley being controlled by a squib. I think I read somewhere that Muggleborns in the HP world came from an ancestor being a squib. Maybe Petuniais really pissed about Lily and siezed and opportunity. I also think you've introduced the character that is blackmailing, I just can't guess who yet.
Great job, and I will tell when I get a new chapter done on my story.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the tribe, indeed haha. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Informative but not overly so, I liked that you didn