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Chapter 33

A cooling off period?! You must be kidding!

Hmm. *drifts off dreaming of a smorgasborg of smut*

Hehe. Ok, ok. I have to admit that I would be disappointed if there wasn't a plot to go along with all the sex. It keeps things from getting repetitive and your plots are loads of fun!

Blackmail....how apt of a chapter name. With what must i blackmail you with to get you to revisit the wall of paintings?? HUH????

Ok you asked for it!! I WANT LEMONS!!!!!!!!! *throws herself on floor and beats her fists with the energy of a petulant 6 year old!*

Haha a "sm

oh! this next chapter is going to be G O O D!!!!! well they now have more information but fewer answers then before. (sorry i am so distracted about what lucius is going to do!!!!!!!!!!) ......oh i almost forgot --where--did hermione go really cause you have to know that she really did not go to the wand shop that would just be crazy. well as alway in time right? :) cant you update sooner than a week?! :)

I like plot advancement as much as the next reader. But I must say, I love lemons with Lucius. Anyway, the mystery deepens, and I like to see what happened there with the Malfoys and the Squibs.

Well, I think it's book five. Nope, correction, it's book 6 (The Killing Dance) It's about chapter 30 ish. Opens with a sobbing-her-heart-out Anita.

Somebody fill Lucius in on what Herms was on about! Oh, never mind, she does later down. Though, I've images of tWoO being like the monster book of monsters and having testicles so LM can hex them off... can you tell I've not had a cuppa yet this morning?

Blackmail... oooh, the plot thickens like a non-newtonian fluid.

Oooh, retail therapy, just as good as sexual healing! lol!

Welcome to the tribe! lol! Cracking phrasing there!

Whats up with the pale complexion? Eh? Eh? Nowt wrong with pale and interesting! *huffs*

I still have absolutely no clue where this is going!! I love that!! There's nothing worse than having a story all figured out in the first few chapters.

Still, the smutty bits alone could carry this fic far. Very far.

Bring back the hipbath. There's fun to be had with that.

I love it how even though he

A great chapter. I look forward to reading more to see if Hermione and Lucius figure out who the blackmailer is and to clear the Malfoy name.

I can not figure it out. Thank you! I love stories that twist and turn never revealing themselves. I wonder if the veil created a new world for Hermione or simply arranged the world to fit the new needs?