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I'm excited right along with Minister Stump! What a fantastic idea. I loved how you laid everything out with their ideas and brainstorming. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

I am inwardly laughing at the fact that Lucius is having trouble thanking the House Elves. I can just imagine the grimace on his face as he tries to spit the words out. If only I were a fly and could watch the expressions across his face. LOL.

So I was catching up on the last few episodes of Brotherhood that I missed and was treated to the ever lovely sight of Jason Isaac's butt. It's a good butt. A VERY good butt.......................sigh. lol

Great update! I can't wait for more!

Wow, I am really looking forward to your next installment. I do believe that the magic world would be better off appreciating the Links, as you call them, instead of ignoring them. I wonder when Lucius and Hermione will be going back to their rightful time and what impact their new scheme will have on everyone they know. Keep up the good work!

That was a heck of a chapter. Almost as exciting as the lemons. I like the plan, and the fact that it will make a "useless" sector of society useful at least in the eyes of the more magically gifted just that much better. It will be quite interesting to see who is opposed.

Chapter 34

*dances the lemon dance*

woohoo!

Ahem. Sorry. Good lemon that...

Ok. I think I'm sated for now onto the plot! (I lie of course! Although you know I like plot as much as I like smut, possibly more...)

As to who was dominant: I think it was Lucius. He was calling the shots in the end and although Hermione was in control of her actions she was still following instructions.

Hello luv, I keep reading your notes to the lovely lurkers... and I had to write this for you:

To those of you who lurk in the dark,
Please, step to the light and make yourselves stark!
I do not ask for essays, just a mere phrase,
Even the smallest comment will amaze!
I only wish to know your thoughts,
(And to check my writings are what they ought!)
I write for my pleasure and I hope you find
The time to type me but a few lines.

And for those who always speak,
Your continued comments are a treat!
But move up and make room,
As I think some lurkers will soon bloom!
Make them welcome, for they are shy,
And along with you, to them I

Well, Lucius picked the activity, and the curtain-raiser too, so he has had a fair bit of dominant input. But Hermione gets control of situations by being very, very good at what she is doing, and she certainly played true to form there! So it's pretty close, I think.

I love that Lucius has a maze - and the excellent uses to which he puts it. I was in a maze last week; shame it was full of people! Hmm.

Fantastic smut; it's always so detailed (was going to say blow-by-blow), as if you are watching it in slo-mo freeze-frame. Absolutely nothing is missed, every sense covered, plus what's going through their mind. It is truly like vicarious shagging! And that's what we're after round here ;).

More power to your elbow!

Well, that was a lot of smutty goodness! I think that's the lemon quota topped up for another couple chapters. Those picture tiles have been one of the best things about this story. Hope they'll be making another appearance soon.

I almost choked on my drink when Lucius told Hermione to 'lick me like a lollipop'. funny and yum, Lucius-flavoured lollies. They would be big-sellers! But 'You owe me, Curly. Pucker up' was the kicker. I really laughed at that one - I love this so much!

That spanking came out of nowhere - especially for just a little tickle! Hey - slap and tickle! lol, I'm a bit slow - the smut makes my brain stop functioning apart from at basic level.

Anyhoo, fantastic chapter and I love how comfortable Hermione is getting with her new sexual side and Lucius with his loving side. All so good!

I will keep you posted with updates on my progress towards Lucius - just waiting delivery of the hazmat suit and then it's off to see naked lucius, wonderful naked lucius! It's gonna be a long visit!

Great lemon, but I think I'm starting to look forward to the mystery aspect of the story. It's still a great story though, keep it up!