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Enjoying the wonderful vocabulary and build-up of erotic tension! Bravo! Illuminare x

While I skip some sections of your stories, I must say your LM tales are a work in erotica , full of feeling and decadent. Thos one of my favorites since it has a decent ineresting plot. Your writing is smart and articulate and let's not forget the inherent humor and mischief. Good work

I just couldn't help myself, I had to start reading this one again! I think that this one was my favorite out of the whole story. It's so....can't think of a word.... I guess so "unLucius" to try to save someone else, especially if it means his own death.

Anyway, just thought to let you know that I love this story and will probably read the rest of it through the day. Great job!

Thank you, thank you for such an original, sexy and exciting story! You are truly a master, weaving plot lines deftly and keeping to cannon characterizations. I loved every chapter. This is at the very top of my all time favorite list. And I do appreciate that you keep to your promise of finishing every story. This one was sublime. I love that you use big words too - educate the masses for they shall lift us all up as a community. Bravo!

Thank you for such a good story. I am curious how the Veil played a role in their situation and wonder if they will ever run into anyone else from their time.
By the way, the picture of a shirtless Lucius was wonderful. You made me and my coworkers very happy to drool over the Luscious Lucius.

Another amazing tale. Thanks for sharing.

I admit, I'm not a frequent reviewer, mainly because most pieces of fanfic don't incite much of a need to say "oh man, that was GREAT!" This one, however, did. I loved it from beginning to end. It was well thought out, clever, and it was paced very well. Nothing felt rushed, nor did it drag on. I loved that the story wasn't just pure plot, that there were little tidbits of everyday life thrown in with the development of H & L's relationship and the mystery of the Veil and the prophecy. Thank you for writing and publishing this -- it was one of the better pieces I've read in a very, very long time, and I very much enjoyed reading it. :)

Okay, I began to read this story about a year ago, but then around chapter 33 or something I went on vacation and then I started to pack to move from home and begin University. Around Christmas I was settled in and started to read the story again but then I realised that I had forgot a lot, and this being a mystery it

this was absolutely amazing!!! but now i;m sad that it is over :( ohh well I suppose I'll just have to find another one of your stories to read. Thanks again for the reading suggestions, they are infinitely more interesting then my summer read of Ulysses.

i love your story!!! you answered my question on LJ so I thought I should read one of your stories first since i finally have some time! This is my first time on aff so it took me a coupe of chapters to notice the review button. can't wait to read the rest of the story.
liz