rate_review Reviews

Hi there. I'm a new lurker. I just swallowed your entire story in 2 days. I love it. I love where it's going, and can't wait for the next installment. Your lemons are fantastic, your writing superb, your attention to detail is refreshing, and even your frustrating couple's stuff is enthralling. I do love a good mystery, and it seems as though I have found an excellent example of one. Now I'm off to devour anything else that I can find by you. Cheers dearling.

~Mia

wow, that's a big jump for the plot. I think one of the best parts of the story is Lucius' turnaround as far as non purebloods are concerned. Obviously because of Hermione, his attitude had to change but he now realises what has to be done to save his world and he is definitely becoming a better man. It's great that the minister is on board. I hope there's not going to be too much resistance from the other purebloods.

I do love your descriptions of clothing and I love the thought of Lucius in tight pantaloons. Damn, that would be a yummy picture!

Hazmat suit has arrived, so it's off to bed to get some rest then up bright and early and off to azkaban. It might be a long day till I reach Lucius' cell but it will be totally worth it! I'll let you how it goes!!

ok... this was a very good update... i like the new name links and how everything will be set up... my only worry though, is the whole butterfly effect...what's about to happen is a HUGE change to the past and will ripple into the future.... will it change events so much that tom riddle will never be born or maybe hermiones parents will never meet and she won't be born.... the consequences to their actions can end up being sooooooo far reaching....ok... that's all i have for u! the end!

You did a great job resolving (I hope) the Squib problem. I always disliked that term. I think Link will be much better. The idea of having them sorted with the rest of the school, having them 'mainstreamed' so to speak with certain classes was brilliant. It is like they are magically disabled.

I want to know what's going on with Lucius' 'Uncle' He seems a right bastard and one who would not stop at just blackmail and slander. I hope we find out soon, along with the next picture that's going to be chosen.

I'm glad your Lucius doesn't discount Hermione's brains. He really needs her in this instance. I think, if they are going to get back to their own time, that they will find a very changed world.

I'm still wondering who the Master guy is. I still suspect it's Dudley, but since you won't say, I guess I'll just have to wonder. Hmmmm...

Oh yeah, and I enjoyed the chapter. I don't think I wrote that earlier.

I finally caught up with you!

I wanted to leave a comment on the story, to date, not on bits and pieces.

This story has managed the impossible! I actually got my husband interested in it! He doesn't like HP much, thinks its childish and the like, and since he was around in early Star Trek fandom, he knows the exaggerated, and sometimes ludicrous, lengths that fanfiction can go to.

Now, he's interested. He lost his sight a few years ago, so I've read your story to him. He wants me to read more.

I thought I'd accomplished a miracle fifteen years ago when I got him to play D&D. Now, he's going to be part of my fanfiction life, as well.

As for the wine, a little doesn't hurt, and if its red, it might just help. :D

Kudos to Utopia for the fine turn of pen.

Phew, Hermione jumping right into the Azkaban issue -- although I enjoyed Lucius' explanation of his time there. I find Azkaban to be one of those untapped areas in canon and fanfiction that both need addressed more often. It's almost like a black hole -- it's there, we know it's there, but we really don't know much else.

And, Hermione seems to be learning to be a bit more tactful where Lucius' feelings are concerned. I like it.

A school for Squibs/Links? And Lucius thought of this all on his own? Wow!

And the plot moves forward. Now, I just question if the author plans to put forth a theory on the occurence of squibs in the first place. Something else I read made me think of your story and how these poor squibs could be related to the pureblooded ancestors spending entirely too much time riding a broom and, ::coughs delicately:: injuring the swimmers. LOL -- weird, I know. I'm still tired and out of sorts from the camping adventuress.

Thanks for sharing!

Hahaha! So Hermione is driving Lucius to distraction with her ever insatiable mind

Oh yes, and I wanted to say, I loved Utopia's poem. That's wonderful that she wrote that for you!

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Ooh! Another chapter and I didn